well im back and all I can say is im satisfied with the ending.Thanks for making this and hopefully you don't get fired from you job.

you must be tired, 5 AM dang man. get more sleep and stay hydrated. anyway great chapter.

I am a native English speaker who cant even learn another tonge and still has trouble writing. I haven't even read yet but, I commend you on you efforts.

great job

Yes I caught up! well grom 60s to now have bren great even before that I really think this could be great.

I am getting closer to the current last chapter. I feel speedy.

what about skadi

hello

alright i finshed the chapter thank you.

I am speed

okay now i know im asking for the impossible, but ray needs To stand up for herself, and who cant sapphire resurect mousy.

um i was under the impretion Gopher was the original Tey. Also Gophers are viscious and brutal.

Tay needs more screen time

Tey and Tey

I would like it of Tay was thought how to fight by Sapphire. You don't have to do this.

Really good book the character development is awesome, Though grammar could be better. I really look forward to this book becoming something great.

I forgot to mark as spoiler.