really enjoyed this! the characters /development, tone, setting! all great!

will you please continue this one? I like most of your work but I love this one

it's not jaundice. it's eczema

I'm done

I'm really sick of these old su jackasses

I hate you and your cliffhangers . I may stop reading this

I really love this story but I really hate that you take so long to make a point and I only get to read 4 chaps a day. I can't afford to pay more . greedy authors

this is fun

now I only get one chapter a day?! boo

I like this story but there is too much side stories and I just can't afford to pay for 130 episodes just to see what happens 😕

exciting story.

please no back stories! I hate back stories! especially back stories of insignificant side characters !

why not just send bird spies first? This is bad ideas

is there more coming? did you die? I liked this so far

how we gonna ship anyone? lead character is 9yrs old and everyone else is too new. victor should have died horribly already. they've found baby. victor can die.

pretty exciting . eager for more

wth? why i can't access the rest of the chapters and now I get a message saying the story ends today? I hate this app. wtf I'm doing with my time and money!? Netflix is only $18 a month unlimited! this is bullshit app!

I have hardly laughed so hard at a book! enjoying this very much!

yes! death and destruction in her wake!

dang! just kill the girl n get paid! it will be easy!