This chapter was a bit too lurid for my tastes ans i believe is the end of my reading of your work. I wish you writing sccess in the future JJ.

The plot is becoming more intriguing!

Sorry, Jasmine. Did not mean to incorrectly spell your name.

Thank you, Jadmine, for keeping this sensual ( wIthout the smut/**** descriptions). Well done!!!!

Your writing havs improved tremendously. I cannot imagine how hard it is to write in a second language so i compliment you on your achievement and abilities.

Praying for you.

Such tenderness!

Illyas, does anyone else have reservations or doubts about him?

Happy New Year! Let’s pray 2021 is filled with health and happiness!

Zarin will step up and so the right thing!

Good luck on your finals!

Enthralled! Hazel is letting her mamma bear out!!! And how will Zamiel react??????

Change is difficult. The relationship between Zarin and Heaven is like a first love, tenuous, unsure, and kind of frightening. Zarin has been aftaid of his love for Heaven and just realized he did love her when he knew he was losing her.

Compelling reading. Good to know some of the back story.

And that is what love looks like; patient, kind, caring, considerate, always thinking of the other, confident, unashamed, compassionate, protective without smothering, wanting the best for each other...passionate, desiring the other... and proud to have yhe other by one’s side.

Zamiel is honorable, just as Heaven deserves. Ans he deserves to be happy again. And Zarin, too.

Heaven’s ability to use demon and witch powers revealed she is force unti herself. Doubtless she will growstronger and have confidence in her abilities and herself.

Glad you are on the mend and feeling better. Also, happy birthday 🎈. This chapter was not a mess. You wrote a powerful chapter allowing an element of danger and harm to Heaven and to Zarin. Louis’s wickedness was threatened when Zamiel intervened in the ninth hour. That, Jasmine, is writing!

Hope you feel better soon.

What a great opportunity fir Heaven to prove she can take care of herself. Zarin is in the fridnd-zone and a bit late to the party, so to speak. Heaven is already tied to Zamiel.