Celipse

Naur, thank YOU for reading, pooks

homegirl got ditched like she's from the streets

LMAO this comment killed me

I absolutely love how this novel maintains the perfect flow, seamlessly blending historical depth with immersive storytelling. One of its strongest points is how it meticulously explains the intricacies of Imperial Japan, from the functions and hierarchies of the clans, such as the Oda clan in the story, to their deeply rooted traditions and customs. The worldbuilding feels authentic and well-researched, making it easy to get lost in the era's political intrigue and societal structures. While the pacing is on the slower side, it works in the novel’s favor. Rather than rushing through events, the story takes its time to build a rich, immersive atmosphere, allowing readers to fully grasp the weight of the unfolding situation. The stakes feel real, especially with critical plot points like the divine child’s need for protection and the greater struggle to expand their territory. The slow-burn approach makes every development feel meaningful, ensuring that the audience is fully aware of the political tension, and so on. 10/10!!

ah yes. committing seppuku for HONOR.

ah... was i right to be scared..

im scared now LOL

Rip. hopefully he wont turn into a specific british king

I absolutely loved the concept of Dream Sketching. It’s such a unique idea with tons of potential. The use of Passion Energy as a power source is especially intriguing, with its consumption depending on size, strength, and value. It adds a strategic depth to the system that feels well thought out. The pacing is much better than earlier versions. It's no longer draggy, and the flow feels just right. I also appreciate how the story takes its time explaining the power system, allowing us to learn alongside the MC and his friend as they struggle to understand their abilities. It makes the worldbuilding feel natural and immersive rather than forced. The dialogue? Absolutely hilarious. I lost it when I read: "The quill doesn’t care about your mommy issues or daddy’s sad paintings." That line had me cackling. Moments like these give the novel its own distinctive personality. I also love how niche yet refreshing this story feels. It’s truly in a league of its own. Some scenes even hit close to home, especially the parts where the MC keeps repeating their strokes in frustration. It reminded me of my own struggles as an artist, practicing over and over again, which added an unexpected layer of emotional connection for me. 10/10. If you love a carefully crafted, well-thought-out story with a unique power system and witty dialogue, this one’s a must-read.

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