DBoblivion

This is blatant plagiarism of Ominous rain

Thanks for the chapter

Ariel is Bi, by the end of the light novel she has a harem of people so nobody knew who the father of her child was (not that she had particular romantic attachment to that person), her walls were broken down far too easily IMO ( this fics handling of politics and political figures is something i don't like in general) as for norn, remember the succubus scene,Leon considered Sara a sibling for a few days and internalized it to the point he felt so much disgust he resisted a succubus norn has been his sibling a lot longer so i doubt he will let that slide

I think kts OK as a concept but it isn't being done right. It seems way too easy to get vulnerable reactions out of her, her mask is way more fragile than canon and her general knowledge os worse. So I'm OK with the direction but not the way it's being done . How are you OK with norn though?

Why not? There's a dozen main girl lemons out there but no sara ones. Even the jp fics I've read haven't done it

It really isn't. It's a great fic but it isn't

oldeus was such a good character The Moral Decline,Rudy’s descent into hedonism and moral decay, characterized by his objectification of women and indulging in debauchery. This behavior contrasts sharply with the caring individual at the start and the one we knew for the past 14 volumes Isolation and Despair: Rudy's interactions become increasingly isolated and bitter. The diary entries depict him distancing himself from former allies and engaging in destructive behaviors, indicative of his inner turmoil and despair following the loss of Sylphie. Conflict with Eris: His evolving relationship with Eris, marked by misunderstanding and aggression, underscores his inability to reconcile with his past and the pain of his losses. His mistaken belief that Eris is working for the Man-God shows his deteriorating state of mind. Focus on Revenge: Rudy's obsessive quest for revenge against the Man-God becomes a central theme, highlighting his growing bitterness and the driving force behind his actions. This quest consumes him and leads to further moral and emotional degradation. Leon is cool for fanfiction but I'm so glad rudy isn't a moral fantasy character character in the ln or I would have dropped it

Oldeus the GOAT

Hmmmm do I sense a rudy x nana ship? If there's a new ariel ship for Leon then I suppose a new ship for rudy makes sense