
Writing
of reading
25
Read books
so a book is some kind of system? welp
why is she so sassy ahaha
I like the current state of the story so far, hope to see more updates and see further development it is a great find by the way, and also it seems like you are quiet a kin to fantasy XX well the current phase is a little slow, but yea Im still on the first 5 chapter, will right again a review after awhile
I will give the Writing quality at 3 - the story is new and still ongoing so I can't state yet for the writing quality, same goes for the Stability of updates, and Story development Character design and world backrgound might need a little push in their description, also looking forward for the world building. so far so good!!
Truck kun hit again
I love the writing style. Also Got very interesting every chapter. the character development is very well placed. not to mention the plot is also well written! Overall I love how the story is going
okay where is the next chapter lol
this is so Good, the writing style is new to me and its a fresh way to learn such way of writing also the character developments a lil slow but the plot is awesome in some point
Really? I love how you portray your character the Character development are quiet slow but the the world building is really amazing looking forward to it