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50points1mthCommentedthe context here is very bad you should have keep virgin rather than virginal when adding aura otherwise it doesn't make much sense
Her virginal aura was incredibly endearing.- 50points1mthCommented
I feel like you might need to look up terms.
"Master, my strength and my skills have improved since before! Yes, ah, ah! Filthy, perverted sex... You've gangbang'd me... I love it..." - 50points1mthCommented
author or translator get him/her and character names mixed up so frequently it is very disappointing. honestly a lot of the instances I am scratching my head trying to figure out who is where due to this. I wish it wasn't the case. I know the name mistakes are not a very difficult fix even but it is a very big break in the story immersion.
Ch 111 Chapter 113 – A Female Academy Junior Desires to Bear My Child - 50points1mthCommented
crestfallen? a fire Pokémon without their tail flame dies.
Irene looked as crestfallen as a fire Pokémon who had lost its tail flame. - 50points4mthCommented
Rama ->Barry
Rama fell next to the zombie and looked up at the ceiling with eyes blurry with red liquid. After finally succeeding in killing the zombie, Barry felt how tired and sick his body was now. - 50points4mthCommented
if he has 13 total magic power and uses stealth 3 times with a remainder of 3 magic power his skill uses a decimal number of magic power. 13=3x 3 where x=3.3 repeated that magic potion earlier was a complete wasted use
[Magic power: 3] - 50points4mthCommented
how much magic power does stealth cost (he only had 13 magic power). if he was feeling weak after using stealth 2 times earlier and had to drink a potion that gave him 10 magic power but now he has used stealth 3 times and his arm is screwed up don't you think he would be dead?
Barry, who felt how close death was to him, immediately rolled over and reactivated his Stealth. He disappeared again. - 50points4mthCommented
when did he pull the dagger out of the zombie head?
Barry kept rushing until finally he was right in front of the zombie. He thrust his dagger as hard as he could into his chest. - 50points4mthCommented
When did he get outside? Do you mean middle of the hall? how did he not notice this zombie when he was in the hall beforehand?
With a smile on his face, Barry continued his journey until finally he saw a zombie standing in the middle of the road. However, this zombie looks different. - 50points4mthCommented
So he can choose between accepting a skill or not? Does he have a limitation on the amount of skills allowed? it is a passive skill meaning there is no downside to accepting it if there is no limitation.
Without hesitation, Barry immediately take the Martial Art skill without reading the description first because he knew what martial arts were. - 50points4mthCommented
So does this mean Stealth uses 5 magic power upon activation?
Barry drank the potion and immediately felt his body being revitalized. His Magic Power is full again. - 50points4mthCommented
Do zombies have friends?
Then he immediately moved towards the other zombie who didn't even realize that his friend had died. And killing him instantly. - 50points4mthCommented
Rama -> Barry
Apart from the Magic potion, he also gets free attribute points even before leveling up. Without hesitation, Rama immediately used his free attribute points to increase his Luck to 18. - 50points4mthCommented
Does stealth use magic power? That was never stated before good to know now though. How much magic power does it use?
However, he needs to pay attention to his Magic Power because he knows that if he runs out of Magic Power something bad will definitely happen to his body. - 50points4mthCommented
why would it matter if he attracted other zombies if he has the stealth skill allowing him to be unobserved be beings less than level 10? so far he has only run into level 1 creatures. Also why would a zombie drag anyone anywhere? No more comments from me for awhile.
The zombies fell without making any sound. Barry caught him before he fell to the floor and made a thud that would attract the other zombies. - 50points4mthCommented
Wouldn't the dagger get broken eventually due to use? So he threw away a backup weapon (pocket knife) that is easy to conceal and use in a pinch? Sometimes I just fail to see the logic.
'Truly an ordinary weapon.' Barry thought. Even so, this is the only weapon he can use now. This dagger is better than his small pocket knife and Barry has thrown it away. - 50points4mthCommented
Rama who the heck is that? Do you mean Barry?
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Overall highly recommend this book. Lots of fluff moments that just make you feel great. character development is a little slow, but it is to be expected no one changes everything in one day without major cause. The main character does have a system, but it is not overboard and honestly forgettable if not for the daily point system. There are a couple of instances where grammar has some issues, but overall not bad. the entire story is currently free so jump in it while it last!
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