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  • Arch_Angel_9839
    Arch_Angel_98393yr
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    In needs improvement in writing but the flow of the war miltiary and strategy is well written I like reading thank you Author. but still in needs improvement on the writing quality please some words are not written well.

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    The Strategist That Succeed With Gallant Power
    War · ArkAnghel
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  • Arch_Angel_9839
    Arch_Angel_98393yr
    Commented

    this should be a good synopsis

    BlueCrest Academy is one of the best magic schools in the world only students who passed the entrance exam were allowed in, no back door, nothing, squat, zilch, not happening unless you pass the test your good grades and athletics could only get your foot in the door.
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    The BlueCrest Academy
    Fantasy · The_RedMagician
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  • Arch_Angel_9839
    Arch_Angel_98393yr
    Commented

    I like the prologue so amazing for real

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    The Strategist That Succeed With Gallant Power
    War · ArkAnghel
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  • Arch_Angel_9839
    Arch_Angel_98393yr
    Commented

    Amazing chapter 1 it can hook someone if they want a contemporary romance

    Ch 1 Kidnapped.
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    Marriage Affairs: Mysterious Family Line.
    Urban · _Love_Illusionist
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  • Arch_Angel_9839
    Arch_Angel_98393yr
    Commented

    More more!

    Ch 3 Dirt from Dirt Part 2
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    The Strategist That Succeed With Gallant Power
    War · ArkAnghel
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  • Arch_Angel_9839
    Arch_Angel_98393yr
    Commented

    Tragedyyy noooooooo

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    The Strategist That Succeed With Gallant Power
    War · ArkAnghel
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