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I’m disappointed to see since getting together Sophie’s character hasn’t developed, nor has it retained its’ best qualities. She seemed so strong, smart, witty, independent, and willfull. Now she’s just a wife. We’re missing getting to know the character as an individual.
Author, I have been very harsh in my criticisms towards your work. Please understand I would not keep giving them if I didn’t enjoy a lot of what comes out of your creative mind. In this modern age the difficulties of woman are as fervant as they were 1000 yrs ago. If you eish to make your mark on society than perhaps it’s best to connect and understand what society yearns for. Many readers, like me applaud your epic love story, but scorn you for creating a weak female lead. Disdain would decrease if this character were made into a role model for all woman. Strong, independent, intelligent, humorous, cunning, passionate, honest, loyal, empathetic, adventurous, and kind. Now, she is already some of these things, but giving her more depth as a person would make her better, whilst producing a better writer.