For someone who mase it clear to Madeline that he does not tolerate or have patience for lies... I’m taken back that he would lie to her himself! Is this really how you plan to earn her trust???

Im trying to get through this book but its nothing like the first 2.

And per usual ..... the cliff hanger of torment! Lol

And per usual ..... the cliff hanger of torment! Lol

And per usual ..... the cliff hanger of torment! Lol

Couldnt have said it any better.

Is there a reason the bottom half of this page (chapter) is nothing more than repeating the first half???

Ha! LoL! How obvious it was that he liked her! How foolish of him to think he could continue to have her chase after him all this time, even as a friend, only to realize your moment has passed, your competition way out of your league, and the jealous tantrum you’ve been throwing has only damaged your chances. His chance and time is slim... so it’ll be interesting to see if he’ll man up and prove his worth honorably as Zamiel or continue in his prideful boyish ways which will reduce him to nothing more than than the unsupportive, selfish friend he’s been. I have to admit I was always behind him until Zamiel showed his true valient colors, & Zarin’s color started to become more green.

I got to say these oast few chapters of background talk have been somewhat of a bore and a waste of purchase. This story was good bUt ao mu Has been revealed already I feel as though the story is being stretched out in all directions to make it last longer

You’ll be happy to hear that i did figure that out and am reading her 3rd installment!

If she did and wors got out that she willingly went to him, they would all deam her too unstable and childish to become a ruler. I know if I were her parents she would be grounded for life pulling a stunt like that after what they all went through to het her back... especiallu Zarin!

Always with the cliff hanger!!!! 😫😫😫😫

Way to go Heaven! A very loving and even diplomatic way to include your mom ❤️

Im glad she was finally able to tell him everything first rather than have him find out from another source... I was a little worried about that.... but how will they be able to bring their secret out diplomatically??? I feel bad for Warren, not that I think Heidi should be with him, but just how naive he was to leave her alone with another man for such long periods of time without thinking she could develop feelings for another! That and I do agree with Heidi that he is a caring gentleman and I do hope he finds his own true love.

Good for her in taking a stand for herself and for her own life!

Poor Zamiel. I wonder if it was his friend that cursed him to a coffin for the hurt she felt??

So sad to see that good people can turn hardened after such a tragic loss, but glad to see the softer side of him too. Will be very interesting to see if the mark does actually fade and how long they can stay away feom each other until it does....

Honestly I’m not sorry for Warren. He knows his cousin, & should therefore know the risks of leaving his fiance alone with him so much. Also, I cant help but think when her past comes to light that he’d try to find a way to walk away anyway, with or without his mother’s insistence.

Interesting storyline here. Would be an wasy read if every chapter disnt start with the first 1/3 of the previous one having to quickly scroll through it to get to the rest of the story. Other than that, not a bad start :) I do feel hopelessly sorry for the girl & hope she will finally excape the claws of this devil for good and end up in the arms of her childhood boy-friend.

Doesnt seem so expensive in the beginning but every chapter begins to add up.... It does get to be very expensive :( Especially for her book about Damien’s Pet.... over 700+ chapters!!!! I joined the club just so i could read it with the extra 500 coins i had until I realized I’d barely made a dent in the story. At this rate it’ll take me a year to finish just that one!