too basic

shoot

their

I think you were nodding off writing this paragraph 😂

Rewrite first sentence

clicked “Accept” didn’t have any other choice

3’s & 5’s get confusing

reread & restructure this paragraph

“second floors height” is confusing

slowly

raising

Choose about or nearly but font use both

wiped

“Into the ofZane” ??

wipe not whip

what she intends

no need for 2 “longer” in a sentence

knew

with the other

know better