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When I started this, I thought the author had shot themself in the foot by trying to build on the beloved world of Avatar, something millions of people worldwide grew up with. But I've been really impressed. The story is interesting enough that you don't know what'll happen next, even though you're quite familiar with Avatar. The characters are delightfully complex, the action sequences are thrilling and easy to follow, and the events unfold at a pleasant pace. I think it's well worth a read.
Thank you. ❤️
you mean I *can't* promise that we won't run...
vilia? you mean Nilia?
"sera swing the cane tucked under her armpit." Tessa you mean...
he would obtain his sister with or without his sister?
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lithe figure? isn't Seth gaunt?
the screech let out stunned the creature.... pls check
but he never in his wildest dreams did he imagine. two hes in that sentence
whenever he needed purchase? or is it perspective?
'he didn't remember being so .... at archery ' being so what?
'he was 2.5 metres Tall' not all. also, why not two and a half?
"his eyes touched" may not communicate what you think it communicates
paths leading IN and out