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Iyiola_Ademola

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  • Iyiola_Ademola
    Iyiola_Ademola1yr
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    When I started this, I thought the author had shot themself in the foot by trying to build on the beloved world of Avatar, something millions of people worldwide grew up with. But I've been really impressed. The story is interesting enough that you don't know what'll happen next, even though you're quite familiar with Avatar. The characters are delightfully complex, the action sequences are thrilling and easy to follow, and the events unfold at a pleasant pace. I think it's well worth a read.

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  • Iyiola_Ademola
    Iyiola_Ademola1yr
    Commented

    very interesting to learn more about Mark and his motivations I like him even less now

    Ch 17 16.Third Test
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  • Iyiola_Ademola
    Iyiola_Ademola1yr
    Commented

    Thank you. ❤️

    Happy birthday, Matthew. The bestest big brother in the world.
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  • Iyiola_Ademola
    Iyiola_Ademola1yr
    Commented

    yay!

    Ch 15 14.King Bumi
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  • Iyiola_Ademola
    Iyiola_Ademola3yr
    Commented

    you mean I *can't* promise that we won't run...

    His full beard veiled his smile as he continued, "the forest is dangerous; I think every adventurer here can admit that much. I can promise that we won't run into another rank-three pack, but I can promise is that I'll try my best to keep you all safe," his voice peaked at the last sentence.
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  • Iyiola_Ademola
    Iyiola_Ademola3yr
    Commented

    vilia? you mean Nilia?

    "So, you only use a single spell?" Seth asked Vilia.
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  • Iyiola_Ademola
    Iyiola_Ademola3yr
    Commented

    "sera swing the cane tucked under her armpit." Tessa you mean...

    'Whatever plans he has for me, I can't stick around to find out. I need to stop Seth before he gets himself captured or killed.' Her brows crumpled in concern. While her mind wandered, another tentacle lashed at her. This time it blurred as it whipped. Sera swung the cane tucked under her armpit. Fragments of white bones scattered in every direction as the dome rung out. She felt her cold feet tighten around the cold stone floor she stood as pain spread through her body. The tentacle of darkness faded after she reestablished control over the dome.
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  • Iyiola_Ademola
    Iyiola_Ademola3yr
    Commented

    he would obtain his sister with or without his sister?

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  • Iyiola_Ademola
    Iyiola_Ademola3yr
    Commented

    these two make a scandalous lot! it's a very welcome change of pace from the combat and training we've been reading. more please 😊

    Ch 26 Kreco
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  • Iyiola_Ademola
    Iyiola_Ademola3yr
    Commented

    ...

    He sighed loudly as a sickly young man and a slight female with a beautiful freckled young lady approached.
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  • Iyiola_Ademola
    Iyiola_Ademola3yr
    Commented

    yay.

    Ch 21 Blessed Ones
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  • Iyiola_Ademola
    Iyiola_Ademola3yr
    Commented

    lithe figure? isn't Seth gaunt?

    Seth found this sudden build-up of rage alien to him. It was as though the anger and lust for blood didn't come from his mind. He subdued the bloodlust by breathing slowly and reminding himself that it was neither the time nor place for such. He turned around and ran as fast as his lithe figure would let him.
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  • Iyiola_Ademola
    Iyiola_Ademola3yr
    Commented

    the screech let out stunned the creature.... pls check

    Seth bow hand slightly quivered. He expected to find some scraggly, enfeebled beast he could take down with a few well-placed shots, not a mythical creature with untold strength. He thought of fleeing. If the stories about the beast were true, he knew didn't stand a chance. Its strength grew the more it killed, and ate, and it never physically changed regardless of how much power its lithe figure held. The screech let out stunned the creature would be a pain to deal with in the heat of battle.
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  • Iyiola_Ademola
    Iyiola_Ademola3yr
    Commented

    but he never in his wildest dreams did he imagine. two hes in that sentence

    A patchwork of heretics who worshipped Narza, the god of Undeath. The beast that stood in the clearing gobbling up the carcass of its prey was a Blight Ghoul. It was one of the races of bloodkin, that Emperor Tanu stamped out when he seized power five hundred years ago. There were rumors that the vampires might revive the creatures, use them as soldiers in the ongoing war, but he never in his wildest dreams did he imagine that there'd be some truth to the stories. After all, every child in Mormon grew up on tall tales of the vampires' cruelty and malevolence, the last thing they'd expect was for the atrocities of their nightmares to be real.
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  • Iyiola_Ademola
    Iyiola_Ademola3yr
    Commented

    whenever he needed purchase? or is it perspective?

    The forest was eerily quiet though it was scarcely dusk, and his enhanced senses revealed that nothing moved in his immediate vicinity. Seth strolled to the base of a large Oak tree. Its ashen trunk was thicker and fractured than most, and its limbs peaked above the canopy of green that darkened the forest floor. Seth summoned one of his two new Urum daggers from his dimensional ring, and climbed, stabbing into the trunk of the might oak, whenever he needed purchase. He didn't stop climbing until he broke through the treeline, and could see everything clearly around.
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  • Iyiola_Ademola
    Iyiola_Ademola3yr
    Posted

    I'm very impressed by the plot development. Right from the first chapter, I was caught in a conflict and i didn't know who to root for. But as I read on, I still don't know! it's a story filled with plot twists, powerful mages, sneaky characters and an immersive writing style.

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  • Iyiola_Ademola
    Iyiola_Ademola3yr
    Commented

    'he didn't remember being so .... at archery ' being so what?

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  • Iyiola_Ademola
    Iyiola_Ademola3yr
    Commented

    'he was 2.5 metres Tall' not all. also, why not two and a half?

    "That was not a request, human." The biggest wolf in Long fang's retinue snarled and bared his teeth. He inched closer to the defiant humans. He was 2. 5 meters all, where long fang was 2 and the other three even smaller. The woman shrunk back in fear and hurriedly unsheathed her dagger. Her hands and feet wobbled, and she fell to the floor. A few of her loyal pike men abandoned their weapons and ran for their lives. Chaos descended upon them, and Grey mane's hind legs flexed hard, ready to pounce and finish the job.
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  • Iyiola_Ademola
    Iyiola_Ademola3yr
    Commented

    "his eyes touched" may not communicate what you think it communicates

    "Bring me your leader," he growled at a pink-nosed kid his glowing eyes touched. He was covered in scrapes and bruises from when he fell behind the stampeding crowd. The kid wet himself and could only shakily point in the direction of the brunette clad in leather armor approaching the wolves with a retinue of armed guards. Some held halberds and spears, others bow and arrows. They had clearly planned to receive wolf neighbors. She held a bow herself and approached the wolf with an indifferent smile.
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  • Iyiola_Ademola
    Iyiola_Ademola3yr
    Commented

    paths leading IN and out

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