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Author, what's the reason for making the MC somewhat Thanagarian when there are other options like the Thamagarians, for example? I'm not saying it's bad or anything, I just don't see how it could help the MC's development.

So far it's been an enjoyable read, so I'm looking forward to the bonus chapters, director...........✓\•∆•/\ |[]{}|@

Okay, I wasn't expecting a fanfic of this specific anime, nor did I remember it existed, but from what I can see in these few chapters, it has a lot of potential, so I hope the author doesn't give up.

Is it just me, or is the protagonist's age suddenly increasing?

MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!

I'm a little confused, does the story take place in China or Japan?

I don't like writing reviews because I'm not good at it, so all I can do is give you my word that you won't regret reading it.( (Damn minimum character limit)

Não existe, alem de que so deixar escrito em um unico paragrafro torna ainda mais irritante ler

Your website has errors and ads that make it impossible to access the site without adblock, and even with that, for those who don't speak English it becomes impossible to read, because of the spacing of words when translating

It's strange that this story doesn't have many comments about how good it is. Well, I hope the author doesn't give up and continues to write this novel with a fascinating proposal (google translate)