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    Short1mth
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    Do you just repload chapters or you rewrite them

    Ch 43 Call for independence
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    Steel and Sorrow: Rise of the Mercenary king
    History · Allevatore_dicapre
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  • Short
    Short1mth
    Commented

    Will you updated the characters page?

    Ch 38 Chapter 36 - Three Years (2)
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    [HPxJJK] - Harry Potter and the Supremacy of Cursed Blood
    Anime & Comics · MaliciousPrince
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  • Short
    Short3mth
    Commented

    Didt tobirama die during the 2nd ninja war

    The trio now found themselves in the Hokage's office with Hiruzen Sarutobi, the 3rd Hokage, and Danzo Shimura, the leader of Root.
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    Naruto: Uchiha with a Save Point
    Anime & Comics · TheDanza
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  • Short
    Short3mth
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    You could introduce new OC characters, put time skips if the MC want to finish the academy full and make him explore Konoha more as in political space, buildings and such

    Ch 20 Ideas for Volume 3
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    Naruto: The Life of Shirai Haruno
    Anime & Comics · Aces_BigDaddy
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  • Short
    Short4mth
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    Why r u reuploding another writer?

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: The GOD
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    HP: A Sociopath Gamer In Magic World
    Book&Literature · Kitamari
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  • Short
    Short5mth
    Commented

    Great story so far, when I first started reading though it be a stark wank but actually good story

    Ch 7 Purple and Grey
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    The Dragon & The Wolf
    TV · MonsieurLAH
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  • Short
    Short5mth
    Commented

    Ye that a good to that

    AN: I am not sure whether or not I should use actual High Valyrian and then have an english text that follows showing the translation or just used double quotations marks (""Something like this"") as a sign that they are speaking High Valyrian. Tell me what you guys think. 
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    House of the dragon: The Dragon King
    TV · Shinmon_Dagger
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  • Short
    Short6mth
    Commented

    Great rewrite cant wait for a new chapter

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Final Journey of King Ethain the Magnificemt
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    The Witcher: Aethan of Cidaris
    Book&Literature · TheRagFromTheCrag2
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  • Short
    Short6mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter, hope u well

    Ch 15 Cassandra Baratheon I/Aegon Targaryen I
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    House of the Dragon: Baelon the Mighty
    Book&Literature · PrinceOfNilfheim
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  • Short
    Short8mth
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    Thanks for the story, I enjoyed it from the start till the end, hope u post more

    Ch 60 Afterword
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    The Dragonwolf
    Book&Literature · Gladiusx
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  • Short
    Short9mth
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    The mannis, he isn’t converted to rolor so their be no problem with the faith

    Ch 124 war of the five kings
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    Game Of Thrones: A Knight's tale.18+
    TV · Kagetanehiruko
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  • Short
    Short10mth
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    +1

    This paragraph has been deleted.
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    House of the dragon: The Green King
    TV · Argent1971
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  • Short
    Short10mth
    Commented

    Want more of tywin and amend

    Ch 6 The calm before the storm
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    House of the dragon: The Green King
    TV · Argent1971
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  • Short
    Short10mth
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    I hope you get better, and start writing when you feel better

    Ch 126 No Chapter Today
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    Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
    Book&Literature · athass_prkr
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  • Short
    Short11mth
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    +1

    -Not Strong Bastards(if you know what I mean)
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    HOTD: The Crab's Dance - A Celtigar's Tale
    TV · Giver_of_Crabs
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  • Short
    Short11mth
    Commented

    +1

    -Don't dumb down the flowery words
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    HOTD: The Crab's Dance - A Celtigar's Tale
    TV · Giver_of_Crabs
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  • Short
    Short1yr
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    Darksister:
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    GOT: A New Path - A New Song
    TV · Cadmus_black
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  • Short
    Short1yr
    Commented

    Sunfyre it’s his original dragon and you can make stuff up that he had it before and cannibal story are too many of them

    2- Sunfyre - The most beautiful dragon, a bit small but very agile and young, this one is the original that Aegon has.
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    House of the Dragon: The Green Menace
    TV · TheGreenPower
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  • Short
    Short1yr
    Commented

    I think you should redo or make a new story. If redo keep the backstory but add the location where there land was a importance in history. If new story do it I dance times

    Ch 1 Should I rewrite or continue
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    The Lord Of Skulls (Warhammer 40k crossover)
    Anime & Comics · wiz161
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  • Short
    Short1yr
    Commented

    Is this an AU without domeric Bolton?

    Ch 4 4
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    Life Of Bolton: Hiden Evil
    TV · Nisiris
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