Peter_Murray

I think that is Martian Manhunter's disguise on earth.

I would recommend using speech marks "..." to show when a person is talking. It should make it easier to read. Other than that, this is a very enjoyable fanfiction so far. Keep up the good work!

No harem

"Wich" should be changed to "Which".

I believe the bifrost was around in this time because Bor, Odin's father, used it in the war against the dark elves before they went into hiding. But I don't mind it not being around at this time.

"ruffle" should be "roughly" I think.

Jean

Liking the story so far. Keep up the good work. 👍

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no harem