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If this is correct, the author should fix this.
No, it's the butterfly effect. "In chaos theory, the butterfly effect is the sensitive dependence on initial conditions in which a small change in one state of a deterministic nonlinear system can result in large differences in a later state."[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Butterfly_effect] Essentially, a small change in the initial conditions creates a large change later down the line. This is exactly what is described by the paragraph.
I wonder if Persia will get pregnant in this story.
I'm surprised nobody reacted to this.
Everything's going to go wrong.
Well I suppose dark humor is better than all of those
They most likely had s*x.
Agreed
Not easy
Ominous
Technically you are not alive Reeve
Confirmation that she is not human.
Here is how I would write it, based on what you wrote: I find myself flying up and then down, followed by a loud *thud*. The left side of my body hurts a lot. After some time, I lost consciousness. I then wake up to a white room. “Where am I?”, I think to myself. I start looking around the room for clues.
Agreed 200%
Noir is the french word for black if you didn't know already.
Precisely