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Senior_elder

Senior_elder

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The seniorest senior out there

2021-01-23 JoinedGlobal
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  • Senior_elder
    Senior_elder2yr
    Replied to sCosmicOM12

    Nah, I'm doing a rewrite. This version was kinda allover the place.

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  • Senior_elder
    Senior_elder2yr
    Replied to Ancient_Egyptian

    I'll try to consider it since I have already written this far without titles.

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    Senior_elder2yr
    Replied to lilhawk

    This is a late reply, so I figure you've already found the answer?

    Ch 4 Chapter 4
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    Senior_elder2yr
    Replied to Master_Of_gu

    As I said, thanks for the review.

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    Senior_elder2yr
    Replied to Master_Of_gu

    Ok, first, thanks for the review. Now then, how does anything you say reflect in my novel? Where have I depicted him as a hero? How was his family 'angels'? In fact they treated him as a cultivation tool. Next your tirade is based on your opinions, just because society has a lot of negatives doesn't mean there's no positive side. So you liking R.I doesn't mean every novel should be like that, and besides those 'Angels of peace' that you hate, who do you think they are fighting? Them fighting guys with qualities that you have listed makes it the same as R.I only that you're reading it under a different perspective. That aside, your review might mislead someone to think different of the content. So to anyone reading this, the novel is about a boy with mysterious origins. At first he might come of as uninteresting but that's more intentional as in later chapters, he's slowly learning who he is and showing more emotions. It's important to note that he is not arrogant and cold but rather uninterested in things as unconsciously, he knows he's above them. The first chapters are not that good, but that's because I'm a first time author with zero experience, but it gets better the more you read, this might personal bias.

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  • Senior_elder
    Senior_elder2yr
    Replied to Sesshomaru_

    I did say the body leaves behind the soul, so technically undying, as they can somehow acquire a new body if they so wished

    (God realm)...TRUE IMMORTALITY, but physical body is affected by time eventually decaying leaving only the spiritual body.
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  • Senior_elder
    Senior_elder2yr
    Replied to Gomtuu76

    Ooh, I had no idea.

    Ch 33 Chapter 33
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  • Senior_elder
    Senior_elder2yr
    Replied to AnteChao

    The only thing you can say I copied is the opmc living a secluded life with op beasts. Apart from that, what else can you say I copied? And instead of just saying it's boring, can you please tell me what I need to change or how exactly you found it boring.

    Ch 31 Chapter 31
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  • Senior_elder
    Senior_elder2yr
    Replied to Gomtuu76

    The power structures are the same as the previous universe, making new ones would be a chore.

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  • Senior_elder
    Senior_elder2yr
    Replied to AnteChao

    Well, thank you for your time then. You can leave a review if you wish.

    Ch 31 Chapter 31
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  • Senior_elder
    Senior_elder2yr
    Replied to Zaddy

    I'm still piling chapters so on Tuesday

    Ch 30 chapter 30
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  • Senior_elder
    Senior_elder2yr
    Replied to Ouroboros001

    The story of the old man doesn't end here.

    Ch 23 Chapter 23
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  • Senior_elder
    Senior_elder2yr
    Replied to Ouroboros001

    Yeah.

    Ch 21 chapter 21
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  • Senior_elder
    Senior_elder2yr
    Replied to Ouroboros001

    Thanks I'll edit them later

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  • Senior_elder
    Senior_elder2yr
    Replied to Ouroboros001

    Yes there are other habitable planets (stars) as they are usually called, I don't want to screw up by saying the exact size as someone with physics knowledge might spot a plot hole that I don't even know I had, so I'll just say the stars are bigger than earth, the composition is pretty much the same as earth, yes satellites exist. Of course they are habitable. Does he need resources? Yes there exist powerful entities living in the void. Hope that answers your questions. If you have any suggestions or questions please let me know.

    Ch 11 Chapter 11
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  • Senior_elder
    Senior_elder2yr
    Replied to v_Senpaii_v

    I try to update once per two days.

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  • Senior_elder
    Senior_elder2yr
    Replied to v_Senpaii_v

    Haven't decided yet, but five at most.

    Ch 29 chapter 29
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  • Senior_elder
    Senior_elder2yr
    Replied to Venom_God

    What tag do you mean?

    Ch 4 Chapter 4
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  • Senior_elder
    Senior_elder2yr
    Replied to AnteChao

    Nah, no fights.

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  • Senior_elder
    Senior_elder2yr
    Replied to AnteChao

    But it will be progressive

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