I like how you designed the character and background too. The story development is developed properly too yet writing quality could be improved I guess but overall I loved it.

Aww.. I just hope to meet the wolf soon. I am making my own theories haha.. I love it

The second one's good too and the character seems pretty immature being mature.. Hmm impressive

About the first chapter it's quite touchy since the girl is leaving behind her childhood self even hating her likings especially for someone who has been through same things