everything is sooo good!!!! but im a little confused... so.. did they tell there baby snakes to go out and find life...? or are those snakes still in the castle and just not seen so much? bc if i had kids i would want to be with them all the time...

yep! And, you're grammer isn't that bad. Your spelling is better than mine so don't put yourself down about it

Haha i would love to read. the first and second paragraph are great, but im not much of a reader. But it does seem to have a good storyline so far. Keep the good work. maybe you'll become a famous writer or something one day. haha :)

.......... honestly i have absolutely no idea what to write anymore.... i want to give it as much rating as i read it but i have no clue what to write anymore

im going to put as much reviews as it takes to get fast passes for this comic!!!! it is the best comic i have ever readdddddd!!! it has great art work to

EVERRYYYYONEEEEEE this is a must read comicccc!!!!! do whatever you can to read it is the most definite best i have ever read and one of my favorites!!

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

this story is very well written and has great art. An amazing story line and is very detailed. the art is inspiring to me. it has fine detail in every spot!!

a definite should read story!! the art is so good!! also the storyline!! it is funny at some points and sad in another.. its as if i were watching a movie or show!!