Your book was not that bad at all just so e advice naybe make the chapters a little longer and make more but overall it was really good! Great Job!!

I love this story as soon as I read the title I got hooked into it im so inlove with it i would recomend it keep ip the great and awesome work

Im loving this so far!!

I love it but i wish it had a little bit more written i to it to make it a little more interesting butbother than that its a great story keep ip the great awesome work.

I like it!!

Good job!!

I love this