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MichelleDavid7

MichelleDavid7

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First Love: drawing || Forgotten Love: writing || One Great Love: anything art-related || One-sided Love Affair with: music and cosplay

2020-08-21 JoinedGlobal
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  • MichelleDavid7
    MichelleDavid73yr
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    The characters are well developed, and the world building is better than I'd thought it be. It has some light and dark humour, that I like too. I am looking forward to read more chapters. Way to go author!

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    My (Monster?) Hero Life
    Fantasy · Antihero
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    MichelleDavid73yr
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    Stone Tablet -- where covenants are engraved and to be accepted by an angel. It turns into a bond in a form of jewelry or other accessory. Wearing the bond ties the soul with it and the related consequence that may come from breaking the covenant.

    While a stone tablet is where covenants are usually engraved.
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    100 Good Deeds to Heaven
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    Terrestrial Retribution -- an inflicted punishment that bounds an angel to the material world. Each retribution varies depending on the number of times a covenant was broken, and how justifiable were the reasons for breaking a covenant.

    "As the Reigning Angel of the Terrestrial Realm, I stood by the selfless acts of Estrelle. It may be that she had broken the covenant, but it was justifiable. I hereby propose to this Council that Estrelle be subjected to a Terrestrial Retribution for one hundred good deeds bound to earth until completion. Upon completing the deeds can she only ascend to heaven and restore divinity."
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    100 Good Deeds to Heaven
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    MichelleDavid73yr
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    Terrestrial Rank -- the lowest rank in the Angel Triad Hierarchy. The triad that was given dominion over the Terrestrial / Earthly Realm. Terrestrial Covenants -- covenants that concern the Terrestrial Realm and everything in it. Varies for every Choir in the triad.

    Covenants are sacred vows that every angel is bound to. As a Terrestrial Ranking Angel, I am bound by the Terrestrial Covenants that mostly pertain to human interaction.
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    100 Good Deeds to Heaven
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    Astral Projection / Astral travel -- is a term used in esotericism to describe an intentional out-of-body experience that assumes the existence of a soul or consciousness called an "astral body" that is separate from the physical body and capable of traveling outside it throughout the universe.

    Astral projection?
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    100 Good Deeds to Heaven
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    Triad -- a ranking system that comes in threes Choir -- a group of angels

    "Like the other triad, the Astral Realm follows a ranking system too. It is comprised of three levels of ascension. The highest-ranking Choir in this triad are the Angels of Reincarnation, below it are the Angels of The Afterlife, and the lowest are the Angels of Dreams."
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    100 Good Deeds to Heaven
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  • MichelleDavid7
    MichelleDavid73yr
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    Ophanim -- a celestial being that mostly appeared in dreams and visions. Filled with God's wisdom and express God's creative energy of wisdom throughout the universe. Read more: https://***.learnreligions.com/what-are-ophanim-angels-123917

    "This is a special realm that is not even covered in the Angel Hierarchy. The Angels you see may look like celestial angels but they're not. They are Astral Angels and share similarities with the Ophanims. They are given the dominion over the Astral Realm."
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    100 Good Deeds to Heaven
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    Sacred Scroll -- a scroll that keeps tab of every angel accomplishment/achievement that is important for sanctification || it keeps tab of new skills / divine knowledge/power that the angel has acquired within the 100 years period or shorter. Tokens -- everything that is inscribed in the sacred scrolls turn into a token that can be used by an angel to accelerate ascension or exchange for a miracle that a lower ranking angel cannot perform.

    There could've been another way to save Phaedon without breaking the covenant. I could've just given up some tokens from my sacred scroll in exchange for a miracle, and asked assistance from Lovelle. Why I haven't thought of it?
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    100 Good Deeds to Heaven
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    Astral Form / Astral Body -- a subtle counterpart of the physical human body accompanying but not usually separated from it in life and surviving its death

    I suddenly noticed how my hands looked, then it brought my attention to the lower part of my body -- I am nothing but a haze. It suddenly dawned on me that I am in my astral form.
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    100 Good Deeds to Heaven
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    Sanctification Period -- its when the angels enter into sanctity for 7 days every 100 years by default; but this can be shortened every time an angel accomplished something great -- ex. performed a miracle, surpass adversity, completed a mission, learn a new skill, discover new powers, or acquire a new skill || when working with humans as for the cases of guardian angels -- every good deed their humans do also gets inscribed in the sacred scroll

    Miracles are not so easy to perform. People often think that angels are equally created and could easily perform them. The truth is -- it requires spending hundreds of years in sanctification to learn the divine knowledge and acquire the power to bend the rules of the natural world at will.
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    100 Good Deeds to Heaven
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  • MichelleDavid7
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    Blodwyn is a name that has a Welsh origin and stands for blessed flowers.

    "You lived well my Lord. At least you will die not as an orphan. You will die as a noble, an heir, a rich man, a son, and a husband. Very blessed indeed. The name that your mother gave you is very fitting, Blodwyn. It's just a shame, that you put it all to waste."
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    100 Good Deeds to Heaven
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  • MichelleDavid7
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    A serum made from Heartbreak Grass -- a flowering plant that is poisonous and contains toxins that can cause headaches, dizziness, blurred visions, dry mouth, and difficulty speaking and talking in its early phase. Severe cases can cause muscles in the body to experience weakness, spasms, contractions, and paralysis.

    Fuck this Heartbreak Serum!
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    100 Good Deeds to Heaven
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  • MichelleDavid7
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    Ch 1 Demise
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    100 Good Deeds to Heaven
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  • MichelleDavid7
    MichelleDavid73yr
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    Well written, and very detailed. I am really hooked up, and will surely read more. I now understand what the hype is about. I like how this book keeps you guessing -- what she will become next? Well done author!

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    Milady, Your Identity Please!!?
    Urban · Leorote
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  • MichelleDavid7
    MichelleDavid73yr
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    This book reminds me of those books I used to read when I was a ****. Also gives me that classic **** movie feels. Narration is average, and the writing style is focused on dialogues, It can be greatly improved if author would make a good balance between narration and dialogue. Cover is cute <3

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    MY LIGHT WHO CHANGED MY LIFE
    Teen · Raghad
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  • MichelleDavid7
    MichelleDavid73yr
    Replied to Chuck45Single

    thank you so much!

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    Switching Bodies Twisted Fates
    LGBT+ · MichelleDavid7
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  • MichelleDavid7
    MichelleDavid73yr
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    This book makes me feel nostalgic about one of those childhood fairytales I grew up with. It was perfectly written and very easy on the eyes to read. Word choices are excellent which makes it relatable to the readers and get that first-hand feels. The story has a very interesting plot, which will keep you wondering about what will happen next. I am looking forward to your upcoming updates author. Great job!

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    All Things Bright
    LGBT+ · AnnikaTheGerman
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  • MichelleDavid7
    MichelleDavid73yr
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    I haven't finished reading all chapters yet, but it was beautifully written. Not the typical damsel in distress female lead. Looking forward to keeping up with this and to more updates.

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    My Prince, My Love, My Promise
    Fantasy · MichelleLeeee
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  • MichelleDavid7
    MichelleDavid73yr
    Replied to MichelleLeeee

    thank you for taking the time to read and leave your feedback.

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    Switching Bodies Twisted Fates
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  • MichelleDavid7
    MichelleDavid73yr
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    It was a great story so far. The storyline is good which can progress into something thrilling. Minor grammar lapses but can be fixed. I like how the story gets unpredictable on some occasions. It would be great if the author can make it more relatable with better word choices. Overall, its a story with a lot of potentials showcasing the author's budding ability in writing. Looking forward to more updates -- more heartbreaks and bloody deaths!

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    THE MESSENGER OF DEATH
    Fantasy · the_fallen
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