Fanessia

A story that shows great potential in terms of the outcome of the story. The current chapter leaves much room for thought as the author always writes an answer without actually giving one. I enjoy those a lot but it can be pretty confusing for others but turn into an unexpected twist later on. I'm looking forward to future chapters! Keep up the good work! **: Please give William more roles!

A wonderful story! I enjoyed it a lot. I'm looking forward to where this leads to. The beginning was a little startling, but once immersing yourself past the first few chapters, it got pretty exciting!

Embarrassed?

Yep. They're so romantic. Makes you cringe at their super sappy love story.😣🤭

A nice love story. I like the outline of the story. Buuttt... there is so many different POVs. Kind of makes you wonder who is the real MC. From the start of the novel, the current wife of the king is implied to be the bad person. It makes me wonder about her background. The story seems to be promising however. Maybe write the character's name then the chapter title? Or something.