Chris_Bryant_II
I grew up in Panama đ”đŠ and moved to U.S when I was 15. I'm and avid Martialist and U.S.M.C Vet
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being the successor of the Demon System should even more so be reason as to desuade or calm the sadness and loneliness that plague him. if anything I believe frustration,anger, and aimless resentment would be what the Demon system would stimulate.
Every Soldier , Marine, or Sailor will always be trained with the proper skill set or capability. However, the ability to maintain the temperament or bearing to remain as a service member is a different story. If they don't have it the usually get kicked out real quick. lol
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Love it so far. However as a heads up to aurthor. It would seem the MC during this chapter used a water quench during his forging instead of fish oil or others oils. Firstly it's a delicate process as water quenching is more likely to yield stress fractures to the metal. the proper color after thermal cycle for quenching should appear a dark orange and red meeting with a bit of a black or grayish outline. after quench the metal will NOT have the silver sheen or silver look. Because the forge scale will be built up on the metal after the quench that must be cleaned of before any polishing stone are used on the metal.
listen, I just want the author know. The story is very interesting, and you were doing great until this point where you plagiarized the power concept from Hunter X Hunter word for word. I'm going to keep reading because I liked reading that comic. However, just know if I have to get charged to read further chapters beyond this......... I'm snitching đđ
I can sincerely say that it interesting so far . I tire of reading novels about teenagers that never grow up mentally even after aging in the book. I'm glad to have an adult oriented novel, that hopefully will be relatable. At least as far as the personality of the Father character
The story seems very interesting so far. The opening was amusing and dramatic which drew me in.