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  • DaoistXzVSxK
    DaoistXzVSxK11mth
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    I like how you incorporated some of the in game mechanics and gave a reasonable explanations for them. Shepards bad driving-wnating the shortest route. Shepard looting-Survival tactics. I remember the scene with tombs too. If not for the paragon/renegade mechanic, I would have let the scientist die.

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    DaoistXzVSxK11mth
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    please make more chapters

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  • DaoistXzVSxK
    DaoistXzVSxK11mth
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    honestly if I didn't know then I would have thought this was a script from the game. I love it. You really brought out the mass effect feel with this.

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  • DaoistXzVSxK
    DaoistXzVSxK1yr
    Replied to FrozenAce

    the reason why there isn't much background right now is because the world already exists. plus I haven't even started the actual story yet. The whole story that we all know and love will be the first volume. I plan on expanding the base story in volume 2... you'll see.

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    instead of the blueish purple, it's gold

    The weapons are actually a pair of Gauntlets made of Vibranium, and has Mithril circuits inside. The Gauntlets are designed to be coated in magic or qi, this will add extra punch to attacks and can add an extra layer of defense.
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    The plates were made from Vibranium and lined with a bit of extra mithril. Both materials are considered the lightest wich was why the were chosen in the first place.
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    " For my first wish, I wish for pot that produces Divine water."
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    blue

    Electric Aura( capable of repelling attacks and causing damage to attackers)
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    Qi blast
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    blue

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    blue

    Energy blade
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    DaoistXzVSxK1yr
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    my suit like this but gold instead of red

    I am wearing a black suit with golden trim and designs. I want to look extra fancy when meeting my new allies. Cleria is sitting next to me in a secretary outfit with my symbol on the shoulder. My symbol is a golden rose with red fade. ( couldn't find a pic for it.)
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    With that, the dragon disappears and the sky turns to normal. The green dragon balls turn to stone and fall to the ground. I collect the balls and retreat back to my home before anyone arrives.
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    Negai, Dragon god of wishes

    With that being said, I place the seven stone orbs around the statue of the dragon and start transferring my qi into them. the sculpture rises and the dragon balls start to spin. And now it is time to name my dragon." Negai, Dragon God of Wishes, come forth." The sky turns dark and lightning strikes all around. The air gets dense and cold. A flash of light blinds me and a moment later, I see a massive green chinese dragon that wraps its body around the mountains and valley.
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    Wish 3. The power to create dragon balls: obviously he won't be able to do it right away because he will be weak in the begining and in order to get the most out of the dragon balls, he needs to be pretty much OP. The dragon balls will be green instead of the traditional orange gold. Wishes that can be granted are only from Dragon Ball And DXD universe. nothing fron other animes or anything.
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    DaoistXzVSxK1yr
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    house look like dis

    After a few days in the hospital my mother is finally released. She takes me to her home in Kuoh town where she lives in a very large house. And I mean rich people large, WTF. I must be really lucky huh. Anyway It turns out that my father was a rich foreigner who had an affair with my mom and got her pregnant with me.
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  • DaoistXzVSxK
    DaoistXzVSxK1yr
    Replied to Kickedelm0

    ran out of ideas to progress the story but I do approve of others picking it up or rewriting it. I'm goin to focus on my Transformers story and maybe bring out a new dxd story if i have time.

    Ch 24 announcement
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    DaoistXzVSxK1yr
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  • DaoistXzVSxK
    DaoistXzVSxK1yr
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    having the all spark could help him grow an army but if he absorbed it the it would kill him( that's right, I know my Transformers lore.)

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    DaoistXzVSxK1yr
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    I'll try and make the romance a long term thing but there are definitely multiple love interests. There will also be heartbreaking as well. Gotta up the Drama

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