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HairyChicken428mthReplied to HairyChicken42No more curse words or we’ll be rated R
"I'm gonna f*cking kill you!" Quinn stated.- HairyChicken428mthCommented
And now instead of PG, we are PG-13
"I'm gonna f*cking kill you!" Quinn stated. - HairyChicken428mthCommented
I also suggest some grammatical changes, because I keep hear “a testament to” or “of” and also “our shared passion” which could just be our passion instead. I just feel like you are using filler words and repeating the same phrase over and over in slightly different ways to sound fancy. Don’t get me wrong I really like the story, but, don’t sacrifice content just to sound fancy with every line. After a while it starts to get annoying
Ch 522 Chapter 522-In Bed As Always. - HairyChicken428mthReplied to NStar
The two girls managing his books I think is this chap’s focus
Luminara POV: - HairyChicken421yrCommentedCh 2106 Logan is different
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NO!! Not my bois!
"Chris! You can let him go, Peter, thanks for helping me out there." Jim said. - HairyChicken421yrCommented'They… threw my blood spear back? Who… who would have the strength to do that?' Quinn thought.
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Didn’t hikel just pray to immortui?
"I would suggest Hikel, the fourth family leader." Edvard said. "He is a strong leader, and on top of that he was also part of the Punisher's convent. Still, it is best to not reveal yourself to too many people, the more people that know, the more likely your secret is to come out, but these are the reasons for my suggestion." - HairyChicken421yrCommented
This excites me greatly, quinn forging like tony stark is a great visual to have
'I'm excited for this! Maybe we can absorb all three of the demon tier crystals and make some more bullets. Or I can start teaching you how to forge weapons and create a new set of demon tier weapons!' Alex said excitedly in Quinn's mind. - HairyChicken421yrCommented
Remember that the true above demon is godslayer
"That Owl… I feel like it wasn't talking to us. Was it talking to you?" Nell asked, looking at Quinn. - HairyChicken421yrCommented
Death by SNU SNU
"Yeah, sort of, but I am going to go give the women a stern talking to on the Amazon Island. So many problems, but so little of me to go around. I wish I could just use my powers to instantly fix the world, but it doesn't work like that. No one problem is Identical to another, and while some can be solved quickly, there are many that need to be delved into to find the root," I complained and then sighed. - HairyChicken421yrReplied to Gaige_Brantley_3217
I’ve been thinking that since I heard that Alice’s dad was trying to fix her genes and that she looks like a valkyrie
"The thing he stole, or rather, the one he kidnapped, is the original Nephilim from which all of us were created and our first queen." She said, carefully observing the man's reaction. "We are looking for Frejya." - HairyChicken421yrCommented
Hmmmm, I wonder if the facts say that it was Truedream?
"Layla, I'm so sorry," Xander said as he went to her side. "Usually, I don't forget things, but if such a being had done all these things, Don't you think I would know? Besides, I think you got all your facts wrong…" - HairyChicken421yrCommented
Arthur’s long lost deciple? From an original? Am I missing somthing?
'The Punishers… Could it be a student of Arthur's? Arthur's long-lost disciple? Whatever the case. I look forward to meeting him again because now I have my own questions I would like to ask Quinn Talen.' Edvard thought. - HairyChicken421yrCommented
This is the start of his villain arc
[Option 2: Absorb the God slayer crystal with the ability of the Altandermite celestial duel blood guns, evolving them to Godslayer weapons. Removing your status as a celestial and becoming a God slayer.] - HairyChicken421yrCommented
Vampire and descendant
What Quinn meant by this was the strange connection that stopped the two from kissing each other in the past. There was a time when the two of them had made their feelings clear, but the special bond between vampire and familiar made things complicated, and they could never take the next step.