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VWjam

VWjam

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2020-08-18 JoinedUnited States
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  • VWjam
    VWjam2 years ago
    Posted

    The story flows from chapter to chapter which is refreshing. Enough details are given, so the settings are clear and easy to imagine. The characters are okay, and the MC is endearingly silly and entertaining. The descriptions and instructions of cultivation are also easy to grasp, which I appreciate since cultivation stories are a bit intimidating. Overall, I'm curious to how the MC will develop in the future. Nice!

  • VWjam
    VWjam2 years ago
    Commented

    I love me some deserved face slapping

  • VWjam
    VWjam2 years ago
    Commented

    'Bob' is indeed as generic as it gets. And I use it quite alot lol

  • VWjam
    VWjam2 years ago
    Commented

    I like this height :D

  • VWjam
    VWjam2 years ago
    Replied to McWms99

    Thanks for the review! 😊

  • VWjam
    VWjam2 years ago
    Posted

    I had a clear grasp on the setting and greatly enjoyed the descriptions of the city! And the plotline is straightforward, which I appreciate, though this makes me more curious about the states outside of Benma lol. Something that was unclear to me was the class status of the other characters. Maybe this will be explored later in the future, or maybe I just missed something? But for now it's unclear to me whether they hold important titles in the city (if there are indeed titles or ranks of sorts in the story) other than being the head of their affinities. It's an interesting story, however! There's loads to discover!

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  • VWjam
    VWjam2 years ago
    Commented

    Yo...yoooo? Seriously, I'm not kidding, the codename 'Bear' will appear in my story as well! 'Bear' seems a common alias but still, the parallels...lol!

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  • VWjam
    VWjam2 years ago
    Replied to Juliet_Omuadona

    Thanks for the review!

  • VWjam
    VWjam2 years ago
    Replied to Juliet_Omuadona

    I see! Thanks for the reply author!

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  • VWjam
    VWjam2 years ago
    Commented

    Acidic sludge, eh? Interesting.

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