I'm sorry but I will have to say no, I don't need money right now, and making writing this story feel like a responsibility instead of a pastime would probably cause me to burnout and stop writing the story altogether, thanks for the offer though :D

Although I am super grateful for the offer, as stated in the book description this book is mainly supposed to just be a pastime for me, so doing anything that would turn it into a responsibility would just not work for me, sorry :(

thanks for the explanation, much apreciated

Yea my bad on that one, thanks for pointing it out though.

Not yet, he doesn't have anything in the room that would be affected by the rain so he kind of skipped it to get the house done as soon as possible.

Yea, sorry if it wasn't specific enough, I can edit the chapter to go further in-depth if it was too confusing.

Depends on the size of the rock, although wood is weaker than stone, as long as there is a bigger concentration of wood, the rock will slowly chip away, if you are careful enough you can influence the shape of the rock. As mentioned the first time he is getting the rocks from the river. I have actually personally sharpened a rock this way when I was a kid, I can send a picture of the rock if you want to see it (I took it home for some reason), although it can't easily pierce things it is able to cut things.

Think of it like a slightly bigger grave, just that instead of being filled up it's covered by a wall of leaves on top of it.

I cant actually understand what you are saying here, not in the sense of disagreement, I just genuinely can't connect the dots, would you mind going further in-depth so I could understand?

Glad to hear that :D

He doesn't, he just thinks he does.

Could you re-comment that, I didn't see what paragrapgh you commented on, and I already updated it, I would be more than happy to fix my mistake if you did.

I am aware of that, just for clarification though, this is a fantasy novel that is somewhat rooted in fact, and although this chapter is heavily inspired and based on catholic beliefs, it is at the end of the day not the same, and I am not trying to make it that way. The story wouldn't even happen if the afterlife in this novel stayed completely true to catholic beliefs, if you want though, I am willing to add a disclaimer at the top of the chapter.

I am aware of that, also I am writing this from the point of view of the character and not my own. I know that this kind of writing is not for everyone, but sadly this is one of the things I am not willing to change.

From my understanding Israel and Egypt have a cooperative relation with each other and although they are technically not close allies, Egypt has become an important ally to Israel. I will admit that after further research I don't see a reason for Saudia Arabia to help Egypt due to the fact that, as you pointed out, Israel and Saudi Arabia do not have the best of relations, I will point out though, that they both have the common enemy of Turkey. I was also not able to find sufficient evidence to justify the rest of the arab states getting involved without Saudi Arabia joining. Storywise though, the overall result would be Egypt losing the conflict. If I am still wrong about something else here, I would be happy to change it as long as you point it out.

From my understanding, Israel and Egypt have a cooperative relationship with each other and although they are technically not close allies, Egypt has become an important ally to Israel. I will admit that after further research I don't see a reason for Saudia Arabia to help Egypt due to the fact that, as you pointed out, Israel and Saudi Arabia do not have the best of relations, I will point out though, that they both have the common enemy of Turkey. I was also not able to find sufficient evidence to justify the rest of the Arab states getting involved without Saudi Arabia joining. Storywise though, the overall result would be Egypt losing the conflict. If I am still wrong about something else here, I would be happy to change it as long as you point it out.

nice to see somebody actually found this :D

There are very few good kingdom building novels you can find, even rarer those that have this many chapters, if by any chance you have found this review, just give the book a try, I highly doubt you'll regret it.

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