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Daoist4wGsTh2yrPostedThis fic is absolute garbage, not only do they have Harry be this super intelligent person with supposing infallible logic, they have Harry's logic be the dumbest thing possible. if you're a faithful fan of Harry Potter do not read this fic as it seems the author themselves have not read the books before writing a fic of it. the author who wrote this fic is so idiotic it makes ron look like Einstein. DO NOT READ THIS FIC
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if this were an actual thing they would have learned about it, the Weasley twins put immense effort into breaking the rules and they would look for loopholes
McGonogall looked rather pale, her eyes fixed on something that she couldn't see and her mouth twitching. Concentrating, Harry heard her muttering "the Weasley twins must never hear about this…" - Daoist4wGsTh2yrCommented
which is what she said the first time, but the author can't seem to understand basic sentences.
McGonogall stood motionless for a moment, then she managed to recover. "I shall re-phrase. Once you are sorted, your new House shall become your new family, as a family should be. One willing to help, support and protect you as a true family should." - Daoist4wGsTh2yrCommented
which is what she said the first time, but the author can't seem to understand basic sentences
McGonogall stood motionless for a moment, then she managed to recover. "I shall re-phrase. Once you are sorted, your new House shall become your new family, as a family should be. One willing to help, support and protect you as a true family should." - Daoist4wGsTh2yrCommented
... really this author must have been lobotomized at birth
"I came here to escape my family." Harry said, earning several long looks. "is it too late to leave?" - Daoist4wGsTh2yrCommented
Buy all logic Hermione should win this as G goes before P in the alphabet, but this braindead author will find a way to make Harry win every thing
"Hermione and I've agreed that whichever one of us goes first, the other will do their best to join them." Harry explained. "So if I go first, it'll be Ravenclaw and it'll be Gryffindor if Hermione goes first." - Daoist4wGsTh2yrCommented
it isn't Harry's place to tell her that
Hermione looked curious and Harry mouthed later at her. - Daoist4wGsTh2yrCommented
overcomplicating things, not everyone needs to be in relation directly to harry
"Really? Did you know your mother is Harry Potter's godmother?" - Daoist4wGsTh2yrCommented
reminder that this is an eleven year old child
"Shall we, my lady?" Harry asked, offering her his arm and Hermione giggled as she took it. - Daoist4wGsTh2yrCommented
an eleven year old child doesn't have this much foresight, especially one who isn't raised to care about the future,which Harry wasn't. the only reason Hermione even cares about her future is because she probably was raised to care about her future by her parents who were dentists
"Professor Flitwick recommended it to me." Harry explained, gaining a near-worshipful look. "There are quite a few nasty potholes that, unless you know about them in advance, will effectively destroy any hope you may have of getting a good career after Hogwarts. This book will help you avoid most of them." - Daoist4wGsTh2yrCommented
Harry isn't a massive book nerd, why is the author writing him like this
"I have a system." Harry said. "Left, fiction, mainly sci-fi and fantasy. Middle, anything related to school and right, other important books. Now… ah, here we are. Read this." - Daoist4wGsTh2yrCommented
Harry doesn't use logic he is more emotional and impulsive stop changing the core character's personality. especially if the change makes him a worse character. this is meant to be a story of Harry being a Kryptonian. Harry not some rando with his name.
"Only four people were there when it happened and three are deceased." Harry continued. "And I'm pretty sure that since he was only a year old at the time, Potter wouldn't have been able to give much of an explanation." - Daoist4wGsTh2yrCommented
Harry isn't this smart
"I've read those." Harry admitted. "They each say different things happened on that night, but where did they get their information from?" - Daoist4wGsTh2yrCommented
so fucking dumb. what was the point of that, it looks like they're just trying to write more shit into their book, like really a financial advisor? he's fucking 11 even if he had access to his fortune he would not be allowed to live without a guardian and he would not be allowed to renovate shit, the potters only left enough for Harry to get through his Hogwarts years, not enough to make him fucking Bruce Wayne. and having him write a book is so fucking stupid he is 11 years old he should be eating candy and buy joke items at zonkos not renovating a fucking house
"Because I wanted to see if I could make a friend who would see me as me, not as the Boy-who-lost-his-parents." Harry replied.