So is Han Fei just a push over 24/7 like there's a lot of the main character being treated like garbage and they never do anything even when they are aggrieved because of it. Like it doesn't make any sense, a person would snap at being taken advantage over and over again especially by people who are supposed to be your teachers or mentors. I've found that a lot of books on Webnovel just treat the main characters in their books like garbage and yet they are ok with it in the end. It truly is bad writing constantly on webnovel.

So overall it's bull that he has to pay that much at all. If Draco isn't going to own the land after he shouldn't be forced to pay.

I have an issue with the succubus only birthing girls. How do Incubus come about? They are just the male version of a succubus so by that logic succubus only being able to give birth to girls wouldn't make sense because Zaine is a Royal Devil Succubus but gave birth to a Loki who is a boy.

Really don't like the last few chapters since they are really pointless for the fact that Eva and Shuangtian went way to far and even than try to suppress Draco like he is in the wrong for acting out towards their terrible actions. Messing with his mind in my opinion is a huge violation of trust but also shows betrayal. Like what's not stopping them from doing it again since they've done once already? Hell I don't blame Draco for cutting off the soul connection, I would have done the same thing. How Eva and Shuangtian have treated him shows that they truly don't understand him in anyway or at least the previous timelines version of Draco which keep in mind is one third of his personality. So truly find them lacking of being called soulmates if they can't understand that timeline of him.

I have another issue with Draco being treated like a tool at times by Eva. Like overall she has no right to just attack and take things from him. Throughout this entire book I don't think I remember once that Draco took an item from Eva yet I can count on both hands the number of times she's done it to him. Like Draco even provides gear for all his girls in the game and even his guildmates but when there's an item that can actually benefit him more than Eva she takes it. There's the subjugation item and then the upgrade item that she uses on the flashfire item I believe but than almost never uses it. It doesn't make since to treat the person who creates all your gear like that, especially when he is the one doing 90 percent of the work it seems like. Ya Eva has helped a little but nowhere as much as Draco so I truly don't get why she thinks she can just take that stuff when he earns those divine items normally.

So I started rereading this since it's been going on for so long and I just realized how much the older chapters just seem like filler and don't have real content. Like there's chapters dedicated to going over their classes. Like ya I understand the game world is important to the story but that's over the top. I probably never realized before because of the slow pace of chapters coming out but when you reread it, you realize you can skip over allot since most of it is never mentioned till another rank up or they use the skill. Like take half of Draco's abilities in the game he doesn't even use but you explain there buffs for every rank up. It's just simply doesn't make sense and can be considered filler at that point. I'm not even kidding any chapter that is about going over skills is pointless.

A continuation of my previous comment. How Jack is written makes it super hard to read the story again because you realize how much he lets himself be walked over and treated. Like legitimately I'm having a hard time reading it again since I know Jack will never change and continue to let himself be walked all over by others. Like no backbone or spine even when he is stronger than almost everyone else.

So was re reading Achievement Junkie and I gotta say Jack has little character growth in the way of becoming partners with Duran or whatever his name is. Like reading it again I gotta say Jack is pushed around and never gotten a say of his opinion. That's obvious in the very beginning. So I gotta ask what benefit did the neutral god gain besides cleaning up the planet which he could have easily done without Jack. As much as I like Jack I think you could have made him less of a push over as he is. Like is literally forced into how many marriages??? Has no say over it especially when he still is in mourning for the first person he fell in love with. Like that right there should have been a good place for character development and have him stand up for himself. But nope you make him a push over and someone who goes along with others wishes. That's a servant or follower not a partner. Very clear difference. Very upsetting that you tried writing Jack as the guy's partner but in reality you wrote Jack as a servant.

So re-reading this book and I gotta say 90 percent of it feels like Jack has no choice over anything at all. It feels like he's forced along and has no say and that in itself is sad because it leads to almost no character development for him. Like he is more of a servant or subordinate instead of a partner to the leader of the neutral gods it feels. Like 90 percent of the story he never has a true say over what he needs/wants to do.

I don't mind a prequel but I wish you would update this every now and again. It's been over 3 years since I first started this book and it probably has only gotten 100 chapters max in the last 2 years it seems.

No offense but your writing in more problems then there needs to be. Like lets be honest here. All these new problems and issues popping up isn't really exciting anymore especially with how long we have to wait for new chapters. Like I was so excited when you announced this book but it feels like you had no plan for this book or how it would go and are writing on the fly for each chapter. There's things that happened way to fast and even make me wish that you would go back and rewrite the chapters to make them feel more cohesive and fit with the previous book more. Like it's literally one new problem after another never truly solving the first problem without causing massive destruction or death it seems. Like I loved the series but rereading it I can see alot of things now that don't fit right or are even resolved.

I'm happy you released all the chapters without us having to pay extra. I can understand where your coming from for the storyline in a way and hopefully the prequel you write helps you making future chapters!

Finish Dual Cultivation first before making another story!!!! I've been waiting for more chapters of that book but you have yet to make any it seems like.......

I'm confused on why Eva and Shuangtian took so much or any at all when they can do the divine trial themself. It almost seems like they are lazy are just moching of Draco if anything. Especially Eva considering we haven't seen her do much of anything at all. I can kinda understand Shuangtian because of her whole situation training but this is just laziness from the two of them.

I'm happy you started posting again.

So again your other series is over why can't this one start back up anymore? I just finished reading it again to this point and I'm sadden that it's not going again when it had such a massive following.

Hey so not trying to be mean but can you update the chapters more? you hardly release chapters for this series and Cultivation Online so what gives? I can understand if your focused more on one than others but this is terrible it went from daily uploads to uploading once every month it seems.

This is written by someone else other than the original creator of Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God. The author name is different even. On top of that the story doesn't make any sense and can't even be followed in a way that in even make sense this be a sequel. If I could I give this a 0/10 for not only making no sense story wise but for trying to play off a work made by someone else as your previous work.

Probably not the same author on top of it not making any sense at all. I feel like this was someone's attempt to pick up popularity off the original series. I truly don't understand what's going on cause how did he go from being the number one guild in God's Domain to restarting his Tier 3 account when he was Tier 6. Literally a God in God's Domain. Not matter what someone says I won't believe that this is the original writer.

so its been almost 2 years since posted a chapter for this book. can we consider this book dead at this point? Cause you're other book is finished so no excuse to not finish this one