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Nicole_Farah_Diehl6mthCommentedHe can’t hear her thoughts cause she is part demon. It’s not an overactive imagination if your family slaughtered him, well appeared to have, and he isn’t dead. I personally wouldn’t feel like he was there to bring me some chocolate and flowers.
The sound of her heart beating loudly filled the room, and she swallowed the lump in her throat. A thousand images appeared inside her head. Her family slaughtered their bodies on the floor in a pool of blood. Her friends dead, the maids and guards dead, everyone dead.- Nicole_Farah_Diehl6mthReplied to MsJ327
Lothaire will be back SUPER SOON! Roshan is gonna F him up too! Let’s not forget Irene, he messed with the wrong family! Oh wait, Zarin will be there too, he’s not letting something happen to his friend and his sister without a fight!
Suddenly his teeth sank into her flesh. Heaven whimpered in pain, but she couldn't move. He was drinking her blood, and he wasn't stopping. - Nicole_Farah_Diehl6mthCommented
The partying type. I hate doing the correcting, but the author may learn from these. No need to make a bunch of the same comment though! Great work on all of the books, you’re doing an AMAZING job!!! [img=recommend]
Gina let a breath of relief. "Lord. What was he doing here? He isn't the party type." She wondered. - Nicole_Farah_Diehl6mthReplied to samlu
She wanted to but he didn’t want to know and she also wanted him to allow his mother and father to tell him. She wanted them all to come together and become whole. She also didn’t understand the entirety of the situation, that’s why Nyx showed her. She can’t him 1/2 of the story and she didn’t want to hurt him with 1/2 of the truth or he could become hurt again and the wounds never get to close and heal.
"Yes. My mother...she put a curse on me so that I wouldn't be able to see you again." Her voice cracked as she spoke. It was as if she was reliving the pain again. She fought back her tears. "But don't worry. That won't happen to your child. There are many demons that are mating with humans. The witches can not fight them all. My case was different since I was a witch. I was never supposed to be with a demon." She chuckled darkly. "Especially not the devil himself." - Nicole_Farah_Diehl6mthReplied to Daoist6sXsR4
Someone else has spelling mistakes “toi” (it’s too) and sm1 (it’s someone), how do you like being corrected? Imagine multiple people doing this to you over every single mistake. She’s written amazing books on this story, and they do them fast for the readers, people need to chill! Unless you’re unsure what she means, then leave it be if it’s already been commented on, or even if it hasn’t been. Can you imagine how awful she must feel that people are concentrating on her mistakes and not her amazingly great job on coming up with this and having the imagination to keep it going and still be good?!?!
"You are meeting with the witched soon?" She began. - Nicole_Farah_Diehl6mthReplied to Charlotte_Davies_7925
Had, when she was unconscious she was there in that room to heal. She will be staying there again.
Speaking of witches Lucian thought of his mother. He had promised Hazel to tell her to stay so he went to the guest room where she has been staying. With the help of a spell, he learned from Julian he tried to summon her. - Nicole_Farah_Diehl6mthReplied to aledif
He’s not suspicious of them. He determined that he was good enough to be one of the people that could be trusted!
Roshan nodded with satisfaction. This man would be able to handle their secret. Now he had enough men. He didn't want all too many to know. Just a few who could guide and influence the rest and four would be enough. Lincoln, Martin, Declan, and Callum. This would do for now. - Nicole_Farah_Diehl6mthReplied to Anielle_Pistello
She has to be better at it cause she is a queen now
If I was the old me I would have waved it away but after getting myself a bit educated I learned that it could be good to sometimes let people know their place. "Bring her to my chamber," I ordered. Oliver nodded and went inside. - Nicole_Farah_Diehl6mthReplied to Jen_Grey_White
Many kings took the throne through war. That is how Henry VII became king and then his son VIII became king. He defeated Richard III in the Battle of Bosworth Field
From the look in his eyes, I didn't want to know what was happening to Pierre. I just hoped that Lucian wasn't hurting himself by hurting his brother. Even if Pierre wasn't his real brother Lucian had grown up believing so. - Nicole_Farah_Diehl6mthCommented
All great qualities!
"You are curious as to why I want you? Why wouldn't I? You are beautiful, kind, smart, strong and stubborn of course." - Nicole_Farah_Diehl6mthCommentedWithout a word, Roshan took her hand and placed it on his chest. Klara could feel his heart hammering against his ribcage but then he leaned down and claimed her mouth with his. The kiss came as a surprise and Klara felt his heart race under her palm in rhythm with her own.
- Nicole_Farah_Diehl6mthCommented
Nyx is Irene, just like Roshan is Ramiel and Lucifer is Lothaire.
"Nyx.." the way he said her name made her heart flutter. " If you ever want to make a deal, just call me." - Nicole_Farah_Diehl6mthCommented
Probably demons, the low class kind.
It was getting darker and darker and she was still clueless as to where she was going. She had asked some people for direction but that didn't help at all. This was bad, walking alone at night when she was the kind to attract attention and now some men were already following her. She tried to pick up her steps but they kept following her. - Nicole_Farah_Diehl6mthReplied to Danielle_Schneider_4621
Worse works also, he could have other plans that are worse. She maybe needed to add a word or 2, but I see both ways working.
They looked at each other before retreating carefully and then running away. Something about the man's presence was too frightening. Nyx could feel it. He was one of her enemies, but why did he save her? Maybe he had other, worse plans for her. - Nicole_Farah_Diehl6mthReplied to xB2Lx
No, her mother found her behavior to be childish.
"Sometimes we have to sacrifice a few things for a bigger purpose." Her mother explained. "Now, your wedding is soon so behave yourself." She returned to her stern self. - Nicole_Farah_Diehl6mthReplied to xB2Lx
No, she wasn’t a child, her mother told her to stop running around like a child.
"You know that I didn't go to the king myself and asked him to marry you. He came here on his own after having seen you somewhere. He was bewitched by your beauty and he isn't bad looking himself." Her mother tried to cheer her up. - Nicole_Farah_Diehl6mthReplied to DaoistY08GWK
He was the soldier who let Pierre and his men in and poisoned his tea.
It was Luke. The one who betrayed us. He opened his eyes trying to look and when he saw me his eyes widened. - Nicole_Farah_Diehl6mthReplied to Patricia_Kitts
He didn’t like Lucian after he saw the demon side of him.
It was Luke. The one who betrayed us. He opened his eyes trying to look and when he saw me his eyes widened. - Nicole_Farah_Diehl6mthCommented
Her way is right or she can say the closer. Both ways work
The wind blew some strands of his hair onto his face which he removed by running his finger through his hair. The more closely Klara looked at him the more impossibly beautiful he seemed, yet he had that dark aura that surrounded him, warning her of something unknown. - Nicole_Farah_Diehl6mthReplied to Elsa_Perez_8925
Help came and left 🤦🏻♀️😢
"I want to be alone." Klara said.