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Tsuika7hCommentedhe sat -> she sat*
As she spoke, she waved her own hands- her authority weaving to fork a draconic scaled throne that he sat on while a green dress adorned her manifestation.- Tsuika7hCommented
fork -> form*
As she spoke, she waved her own hands- her authority weaving to fork a draconic scaled throne that he sat on while a green dress adorned her manifestation. - Tsuika21hReplied to phoenixinquisition
Tbh. I have no idea what you said. It makes no sense. And neither did the author. So inconsistent in writing.
With that, he returned the now empty tray back to the cafeteria workers, thanking them before making his way back to his dormitory room to grab all of the items he would need for his stay in Clossbay. Unsurprisingly, he decided to bring the set of Intermediate Reinforced Elixir he had gotten from the dungeon to the journey, thinking that there was a possibility for him to break through to Rank 2 while at the city thanks to the Experience Pit. - Tsuika2dReplied to Howlrawr
Just another drop in the bucket with a label that says "Inconsistant Writing" Along with the drop that says "Ning spent under 1 year gathering energy for perfect body when it required more than 2." Consistency in writing is NOT something Panda is good at. Just like proof reading. Or fixing things. So, I guess he is consistent in something.
Ning shook his head and sent a message back. "Next time, try not to shoot me in the chest, okay? You nearly caused me quite some trouble," he said. - Tsuika2dCommented
Alright, thats quite rude. If they are not adults, then why are you calling the "boys" men but the woman, "girl"? If they are adults, it is men and a woman.
There were 2 men and 1 girl, all sitting on the same bench. They were on the 4th row of the 3rd column, meaning they were sitting at the corner of the room. He could tell that their age was upwards of 15 for sure, but couldn't tell their age beyond that. - Tsuika2dCommented
on -> in* their own ways
And it wasn't over as in the midst of their attacks, the other Imperium Knights handled the newly appearing attacks on their own ways as some swung their Existential Armaments to rebuff them, others allowed their Armors to withstand it, and in the case of the Imperium Royal Basileus Observer Xavier in the far distance not participating in this… - Tsuika2dCommented
as -an* instant after
An immense sense of exhaustion dawned on Noah as instant after, his Dominiums creaked as they could no longer bear the weight of the Existential Omniversal Shrouding! - Tsuika4dCommented
Has it been more than two years? If not, this is a massive plothole. Goodjob.
Ning nodded. "System, make my body." - Tsuika4dReplied to ACaS90
All of this is wrong anyways.
"Damn, that's so incredibly close," Ning thought. "So, at 1.28 Billion for 13 times a day, I will need 6 days here to reach a Trillion. Meaning, in just under a year, I can get my body." - Tsuika4dCommented
Chapter titled Lists tells us that 947 trillion is what he needs for Perfect Body. His current energy is 932.5 trillion. His current rate, yearly at the origin, is 6.7 trillion. In 2 its 13.4ish, meaning he has to sit here for over 2 years to hit his energy goal for Perfect Body.
"Damn, that's so incredibly close," Ning thought. "So, at 1.28 Billion for 13 times a day, I will need 6 days here to reach a Trillion. Meaning, in just under a year, I can get my body." - Tsuika5dCommented
her to toe -> head to toe*
This paragraph has been deleted. - Tsuika5dCommented
Really, Panda? You butcher the name immediately after writing it.
"Oh, and even then Tasdo isn't coming here? That's weird. He used to always come by and escort us. Is he that busy this time?" Yola asked. - Tsuika8dReplied to Tsuika
Maybe. lol.
The booming intent of Quintessence reverberated out as all eyes turned towards it, a light of glory and direction shining within its eyes as it spoke. - Tsuika9dReplied to Tsuika
Like, it feels like a syntax issue. But its frequent enough in various books.
"The tournament starts 3 days later, so try not to do anything stupid and get yourself disqualified. You can go out and visit the city, or stay inside the hotel until the tournament starts. It's your choice. Just make sure to return back to the hotel every night." - Tsuika10dReplied to Tsuika
And the amplified emotions of despair and fear is also a punishment, not a curse.
This was truly a terrifying sight to see. Fear and Despair once again started budding up inside Ning. The 'curse' that the system had left him with hadn't gone away. However, Ning had felt this plenty of times before and learned to ignore it pretty easily. - Tsuika10dReplied to chocofrywarrior
It is only labeled as a curse. It is not a curse. The system just shut down as a punishment.
This was truly a terrifying sight to see. Fear and Despair once again started budding up inside Ning. The 'curse' that the system had left him with hadn't gone away. However, Ning had felt this plenty of times before and learned to ignore it pretty easily. - Tsuika10dReplied to gaming_orical
Yeah, the author couldnt do simple math a while back, when qi was at 5 and body was at 6. He went up by one in each and some how, the author made 6+1=6.
For body cultivation, however, there was no such thing as a bottleneck. It was just one continuous stream of cultivation from start to finish. So, his body cultivation was now at Level 8 while his Qi was in the 7th Qi Condensation realm. - Tsuika10dCommented
Sorry, you are doing what now with the spear? It is not a spade.
After a while, he opened his eyes, determined to do something good at least. He took the spear from nearby and started digging the ground. - Tsuika11dCommented
robbed -> robed* What you got means mugging/stealing.
There were three of these massive Entities, and yet above one of them was a woman robbed in a white Existential Armament, her body burning with a fearsome light as she actually sat atop beings such as this.