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You only need the first "be". "be forever be kept " is wrong.
he sat -> she sat*
fork -> form*
Tbh. I have no idea what you said. It makes no sense. And neither did the author. So inconsistent in writing.
Just another drop in the bucket with a label that says "Inconsistant Writing" Along with the drop that says "Ning spent under 1 year gathering energy for perfect body when it required more than 2." Consistency in writing is NOT something Panda is good at. Just like proof reading. Or fixing things. So, I guess he is consistent in something.
Alright, thats quite rude. If they are not adults, then why are you calling the "boys" men but the woman, "girl"? If they are adults, it is men and a woman.
on -> in* their own ways
as -an* instant after
Has it been more than two years? If not, this is a massive plothole. Goodjob.
All of this is wrong anyways.
Chapter titled Lists tells us that 947 trillion is what he needs for Perfect Body. His current energy is 932.5 trillion. His current rate, yearly at the origin, is 6.7 trillion. In 2 its 13.4ish, meaning he has to sit here for over 2 years to hit his energy goal for Perfect Body.
her to toe -> head to toe*
Really, Panda? You butcher the name immediately after writing it.
Maybe. lol.
Like, it feels like a syntax issue. But its frequent enough in various books.
And the amplified emotions of despair and fear is also a punishment, not a curse.
It is only labeled as a curse. It is not a curse. The system just shut down as a punishment.
Yeah, the author couldnt do simple math a while back, when qi was at 5 and body was at 6. He went up by one in each and some how, the author made 6+1=6.
Sorry, you are doing what now with the spear? It is not a spade.