Grammar 10/10 I love the plot already just based off the first chapter. The description is just mwah beautiful everything described was so clearly .... Overall this is a 10/10 will read again

this is a very good story the plot has so much ways it could go which gives it a sense of suspense I love it can't wait to read more

Ohh my God..... Just lovely the story in terms of the plot so far 10/10 grammar 9.9/10 everything done perfectly I'll definitely be keeping up with this.... Last but not least I looooove how descriptive you are I could vividly imagine everything that was described..... This is a great story.... I love cultivation story that made it even better honesty 20/10 would read again

love it so far, it's do descriptive and interesting.... honestly.... an overall great story