While this story is a common trope, I do see tons of ideas that could become important. I also have built a connection with Kazuki, to the point where sometimes I want to hug him, and others I want to hit him. In all, I think this is the start to a very good story! Keep going author-nim!

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I think this superhero story is rather generic, but if you like these types of magical and unique worlds, then this book is definitely for you. It wasn't bad, and overall rather good. I think that this would be a could story as long as the author develops each character uniquely.

Of course! Super good book so far!!!!

The first 2 chaps start off slow ngl but push through! After that, the story fully devolopes and your able to travel withe MC. Its rather interedting, and love the dif povs that switch. Good job!

Never knee I 2ould be interested in necromancy, but here I am! There id a good blend amongst the Martial arts and necromancy. I will say, the book dors start off really slow, so wuick w a's rning. But after thet, it most likely gets better! Good job author!

Please take this review lightly, since you have a lot of time to look over everything and become a better writer! I will say, you should definitely impeove the quality. If that seems like a lot, post one or two chaps a week. it is better! Remember, quality over quantity!

In case anyone needs a little bit of comedy in their lives, this is a good story for that. It is sarcastis, satirical, and breaks the limits of the imagineation. Of course, in a good way. Very incredible book! I personally love it!

I think that this story could be a lot and should be a lot. It seems very extraordinary in terms of the plot line and the way in which the author is telling the story. I think the only issue is the fact that this story definitely doesn't hook the reader until the 3rd or 4th chapter. Why don't expect the author to change this I do think that some hooking material in the 1st few chapters can definitely improve the book.

The characters are very unique and childlike without being childish. Very good story, and I especially love the characters and their little descriptions.

Hm... pretty good. But seriously, I do like the new approach in writing. Differently writing styles are always appreciated, but the fact this is more of a mystery instead of a OP fantasy is never a bad thing. I think you are doing great things author!

The book starts on a smut scene, which was not warned at all. I was a little shocked but it wasn't bad. Enough detail and enough description without being unprofessional. The moaning was funny at times, but besides that, very good.

the first few chapters definitely show a lot of emotion, and dives the reader in quickly. It doesn't take too long, even though it has a prologue. Good job author!

I think that this book holds a lot of potential. The fact that you edit afterwards shows how much work you are willing to put in for this story. You are a hard worker, and it shows through your writing. Keep it up!

It is pretty obvious since the beginning that there are certain characters that are supposed to be liked and disliked, but besides that, I like the story line. I think that, while it can get messy at times there isn't anything bad about it. Son far, very good~

For a new author and book, it has a pretty safe start. I think that there is definitely potential. I think that the grammar is very good. Very good so far!

I think that this book succeeds at having good worldbuilding and a positive atmosphere that makes the reader feel like they are playing in the world through the eyes of the mc. I think the chapter names aren't the best, mostly because of spoilers, but everything is good so far. Thanks author!

uh... shameless author? tho I will say I have started using another editing tool becuase of the grammar comments, and the books are coming out much better! so starting chapter 20, everything is going to be much clearer! thanks!

There are different concepts in this story that are not new: wanting powers, transmigration, ect. But ahving these concepts come togrther is so interesting! Usally the MC would go "Ughhh I don't wanna be here!" But Eddie isnkuch more open and excited about the idea. I like that a lot! I also like how there is a real threat, and protsgonist armor soes not exist in this world. Eddie really might be killed, and that threat rings in his ears a lot of the time. Very interesting!

This story reminds me of a lot of Japanese anime storylines. It feels like that in ways where ir's very poppy, and rarely dramatic. Which can sometimes be good, and sometimes bad But I do like the writing style! Good job author!