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Rowan_11734mthPosted- Rowan_11736mthCommentedCh 1051 The Tournament Starts
- Rowan_11737mthCommented
I agree 😈
"Make sure to do your best in the testing," he instructed. "I'd like to see the look on the three Dao Sovereign's faces when none of their genius's place first rank. It should be quite amusing." - Rowan_11737mthReplied to SupremeDestructor
I woudn’t mind that, if it’s what both of them want (personally I don’t think they should want to merge considering they both have their own lifes now but if they want then its their choice) I just wish (maybe in vain) that they won’t merge just for the sake of John not feeling guilty about liking both
Zuri pursed her lips and breathed over his ears, adding to the sensation of the picture she was painting in his mind. - Rowan_11738mthCommentedCh 1023 Impressive Battle Between Youths
- Rowan_11738mthCommented
I wish Lilia would’t have kissed him before he left, then I wouldn’t feel so bad right now. I honestly hate indecisive characters and him having second thoughts about all his love interests is kinda off putting (keep thinking other women are beautiful and their bodies alluring, thinking about his master, and kissing Lilia back when she kissed him) At this point I prefer him asexual and focus on cultivation instead of a haram
Zuri pursed her lips and breathed over his ears, adding to the sensation of the picture she was painting in his mind. - Rowan_11738mthCommented
Not gonna lie, this is kinda cringe 😬 I really hope MC doesn’t beacome like those arrogant people that Zuri is describing cuz that wouldn’t be attractive at all, MC used to look down on people like that
"Your reaction!" Zuri exclaimed. "I, a stunningly beautiful woman, just showed interest in you, and all you did was stare at me with mouth agape, looking stupid. Your lack of charm and confidence is staggering. You're a handsome, well-built, heaven-defying genius, and yet you carry yourself as if you're a nobody. You need to have pride in your status and talent, and carry yourself with a level of confident pride which you utterly lack right now. You'll never be able to court your companion with this lack of self-pride, let alone charm." - Rowan_11738mthCommented
I don’t understand 😫 I’m slow, is Zuri going to be the new love interest? The way he thinks about her and her flirting is making me think so lol
"That friend of yours is incredibly beautiful, by the way. She's like an ethereal goddess, one blessed by the Heavens itself. She's so beautiful in fact that I must say it ignited my fighting spirit, so to speak. I can see why you were so desperate to find her," Zuri said, her words surprising John at the sudden change in topic. - Rowan_11738mthCommented
Woah 😳, didn’t think the one to develop a crush was going to be John lol
"Hmmm…" Zuri hummed, her smile widening. John couldn't help but admit that she was quite beautiful, especially when she smiled. Her long, golden hair and sculpted body only added to the allure she gave off, like a dangerous yet beautiful viper, reminding him a lot of Lilian. With both of them being roughly the same age and cultivation level, the two were incredibly similar beyond looks alone. He held her gaze, wondering what she was up to. - Rowan_11738mthCommented
I never trust when side characters start acting this nice to MC, without reason 😬, either she’s starting to develop a crush or she wants something from him (maybe im just extra paranoid)
He didn't pull his sleeve back, but he was surprised to see her acting this…close…to him. Zuri looked over her shoulder and noticed his expression, her smile widening as if she was enjoying it. - Rowan_11738mthCommented
Awesome realization! I’ve read a couple of cultivation novels and in some, in order to get to a higher realm you have to come up with your own cultivation technique (b/c all cultivation paths are different), I was wondering if John would ever come to a point in which he realized that in order to find suitable techniques, he has to create them himself, I’m beyond glad and excited that he will!!!! Hopefully they’re super badass ❤️
Ch 1008 Contemplating The Nature of Battle Arts - Rowan_11731yrCommented
Usually, I’m very cruel reader and I like it when the cannon fodders suffer but even I felt bad at this scene. Maybe I’m being too virgin mary but honestly this boy is just pitiful
"No! I'm an alchemist's apprentice, I will become an alchemist in the future!" Ling Mu Yun struggled with all his might, as if he had gone mad. But Ling Zhong Kuan held him tightly. Those still remaining in the private room could only hear the screams getting farther and farther away before they finally disappeared. - Rowan_11731yrCommented
Love that he already thinks of the original’s dad as ‘his father’ 🤭
Ling Han harrumphed. They have gone too far. His father used his life to obtain this position for him, and Ling Zhong Kuan and his grandson dare to snatch it away just like that? - Rowan_11732yrReplied to winterblossom
I remember you asking us if you should stop at 300 or make the story longer. Maybe it would’ve been less stressful for you to make the story shorter. Maybe you can still write complex characters/plot (if thats what you like to write) but make them shorter. I see that on Webnovels almost all action stories are always around 700 chps, so we wouldn’t mind shorter stories. Anyways, everything you write I’ll support ☺️☺️
Ch 338 Old friend - Rowan_11732yrCommentedCh 343 Safe Word
- Rowan_11732yrCommented
😳 wut
"Yes." He hadn't indulged the animal inside him for a while. "Do you remember the safe word?" Artemus could smell the desire spiking sugary sweet between them.