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I want my readers to see the world through my eyes as I utilize my writing skills to depict mental images within their minds.
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Thanks for the review, I'll make sure to take note of that for future chapters! :D
The overall premise is very interesting and definitely eye catching. The choice of words are also appropriate and it is very detailed with it's descriptions. The only small issue I had encountered was of the dialogues. I read some of the dialogues a few times before figuring out who stated them. Other than that small hiccup, it's definitely a good story.
I'm really happy to know that. Once again, thank you so much for giving this story a try and leaving very insightful comments.
Noted, thanks for pointing it out!