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  • GreenScreen
    GreenScreen2yr
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    Honest review (Ignore the rating) Also, pin this author. Alright, where should I start? The writing quality is fine. A few grammar mistakes here and there, but it's readable. Updates are perfect and sometimes go on a hiatus but that's fine since all authors do that. The story pace is perfect, though it leans on the accelerated part a bit. The designs of the characters are alright and the world background is gradually explained at a pace you are able to understand. In my opinion, I say this is a great novel. The first few chapters (Probably around 30 chapters) are very meh, but they provide handy information. After that, the story gets better from there. That's pretty much it... Also, the smut chapters are very enjoyable... if you know what I mean...

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    The Insurrection of the Inept Hero
    Fantasy · MonarchX
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    GreenScreen3yr
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    Assassin's Concentration In Another World
    Fantasy · MonarchX
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    GreenScreen3yr
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    Demon, huh? I can see where this is going. Keep on writing.

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    これを削除7
    Fantasy · MonarchX
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  • GreenScreen
    GreenScreen3yr
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    Good story. I love the way you write and your chapters are readable. Recommend this to other readers. It's a great story. It's potential is very high. Keep up the good work. Greenscreen out.

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    Fantasy · MonarchX
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