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great book my only worry is the updates and the speed that the novel Is going. this novel could go for 1000 chapters this its pacing and the updates are not quick enough for that. In my opinion the author either needs to speed the pacing of the story or update at least once a day if he/she did that then we could have hope of seeing the end of the story. I also know that the novel would become more popular because many people only read story's if they have more then 300/400 chapters
got it I will just imagine you.
your not it is just moving fast
can you describe it a bit better you just said ugly over and over and didn't really paint any pictures look up sum synonyms of ugly and maybe just think about how to describe it more clearly because it pretty vague
you just have to do it 850 times that's not that much if you just grind it for like a day you would be masterful you need to increase the time
there weakness is if you cut off there head they die
mist instead of most
are you being sarcastic ?
just say feline if you cant think of a name
very good all around I thoght the author was being cocky when he said that this is better then most things on this app but he was right the grammar is good no annoy paragraphs were it makes no sense and you don't know what is going on actual character development somethings are left un talked about but nothing super big and the story moves at a good pace updates are good so far hope it continues all around good
room I think is what you meant not rune if you wanna change it
I got to be honest I thought that said arsonist now realize I am just a idiot
kidda odd compared to the other ones