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What does “GG” mean?
“please depart the train”
What the heck does this even mean?!
No one says “a dozen minutes”. One usually says after a quarter hour, or a quarter hour later.
The author should only use Chen for Mr. & Mrs. Chen, but not for everyone else. It’s exhausting to read over & over again.
You can also avoid the in-story notes by adding this description into the writing, such as “... listed both the camera and notebook on the popular online reseller, Xian Yu.”
while not incorrect, a more common use would be “fruitless rage” versus “impotent rage”.