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UnedeadKing23

UnedeadKing23

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  • UnedeadKing23
    UnedeadKing232 months ago
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    I know you read my comment and I appreciate that and I’m not trying to an asshole or anything to you. I appreciate your hard work and novels because I always wanted to write stories myself in the process of learning about authors. Know that there is a limitation of how much of the core can be similar to another novel, if you ever read Game of Thrones are Lord of the rings or something like that you see a lot of these stories having common like the core story for like the first 5 to 10 possibly even 20 chapters are very similar to different stories. That’s OK but after you reach a certain amount you can only do that because then it’s considered plagiarism. Doesn’t matter how much you change you can change 99.9% however if there’s still one percent after so many chapters it’s considered plagiarism that’s all I’m letting you know and I read a little more into your story and it still very similar. It’s not exactly 100% the same but it’s not exactly not the same either. Like I said it’s 99.9% change, but it’s still that one percent that is similar and that’s considered illegal after a while. Just letting you know keep up the good work though.

  • UnedeadKing23
    UnedeadKing232 months ago
    Posted

    I would love to read your story, but I can’t afford it. It’s 15 coins per chapter that’s crazy please other make your story free on a different website or lower the cost. This is getting out of hand on WebNovel please I really want to read your story as well as many other stories but I can’t afford it. Thank you. Keep up the good work though.

  • UnedeadKing23
    UnedeadKing233 months ago
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    I love your story. I read up to 200 chapters nearly a year ago now reading, but I was wondering, did you plan on having any kind of romance for any of the characters but keep up the good work like it

  • UnedeadKing23
    UnedeadKing233 months ago
    Posted

    I’d like your novel so far it’s pretty good however I don’t think you should be charging for this at all. You should talk to WebNovel and cancel the payment because your WebNovel is kind of a rip off the whole introduction and the first few chapters are the exact same thing as a Chinese novel that has been written long before this has and has an anime abject patient for it that just came out It is called the Prince the Yuan or something like that I’m all for people copying novels like this and making their own kind of thing go ahead however for you to charge when something like this already exist that’s not right right now should be classified as a fan fic and you shouldn’t have people paying to read your story when itself is almost a copy like I said you change a lot, but it’s almost copy

  • UnedeadKing23
    UnedeadKing2310 months ago
    Posted

    I love the story and I’m rereading it due my first time of stopping around the 20th chapter but it’s one of the only stories that I can read through over again and still be entertained as well as I hope Nico, as well as Max get into a relationship. But keep up the good work.

  • UnedeadKing23
    UnedeadKing23a year ago
    Posted

    This book sounds and reads like a copy of another book/manga and anime that is already out swallow star. It looks exactly the same thing very little difference

  • UnedeadKing23
    UnedeadKing232 years ago
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    I mess up i am trying to say read the book as read mid set instead of the author mid set

  • UnedeadKing23
    UnedeadKing232 years ago
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    I really liked your book in beginning however after the turtle Guy it got stupid and now shit the story that had promised is now shit you need to back and rewrite the story form there I was hopping it was going to get better but I got worst and going down hill fast I read first book loved now this not so much it. don’t really take look at story and read it self as read mid set and not as author you really need to do this and rewrite because it crap story now please i am begging to do this for the good story .

  • UnedeadKing23
    UnedeadKing233 years ago
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule