UnedeadKing23

I just curious here I’m not complaining about it so much but is it me or the chapter is getting smaller? I just wanna know.

It will be cool if you let them go to the mass effect, universe, or Halo universe or Star Wars because this will be worthwhile, especially FTL technology because this will then give them something that’s worthwhile because then they won’t have to travel through the warp and for Mass Effect universe it’s very easy. You could put them right before the reapers invade now where they have to help defend that universe against the reapers just saying.

Had a great a potential and good story but I can’t keep up. It’s going too fast and it’s getting very confusing to understand what’s happening. There’s no clear transition between chapters in arcs and events what’s happening? He’s being introduced by a teacher next moment he’s already at the Dagon alley and it was not a very clear transition between it’s a jumbo mess

Great novel, but can you tell me the original name?

It’s probably one of the best mass stories I’ve ever read especially fanfiction and I have read a lot of of them, but the updating is killing me. Please get more stable on it or just increase the amount of updates you do. I’m not asking yourself to burn yourself out, but dear Lord, it is horrible. I can lose interest because I have to reread it to understand what’s happening again that just gets annoying after like after the third time but keep up the good work otherwise

I can’t really say much about the story so far due to owner reading roughly up to chapter 10, however, the only thing I can say is that going premium when you hit the double digits kind of ruined your own story because your story hasn’t even started yet and I already have to pay to get more of the story. It’s a slow story to begin with, but there’s almost no storyline no plot line now I had to pay for the rest that’s kind of makes me not read. Didn’t wanna read it but overall good story from what I did read, but I think you should move the premium pay wall further back

I know you read my comment and I appreciate that and I’m not trying to an asshole or anything to you. I appreciate your hard work and novels because I always wanted to write stories myself in the process of learning about authors. Know that there is a limitation of how much of the core can be similar to another novel, if you ever read Game of Thrones are Lord of the rings or something like that you see a lot of these stories having common like the core story for like the first 5 to 10 possibly even 20 chapters are very similar to different stories. That’s OK but after you reach a certain amount you can only do that because then it’s considered plagiarism. Doesn’t matter how much you change you can change 99.9% however if there’s still one percent after so many chapters it’s considered plagiarism that’s all I’m letting you know and I read a little more into your story and it still very similar. It’s not exactly 100% the same but it’s not exactly not the same either. Like I said it’s 99.9% change, but it’s still that one percent that is similar and that’s considered illegal after a while. Just letting you know keep up the good work though.

I would love to read your story, but I can’t afford it. It’s 15 coins per chapter that’s crazy please other make your story free on a different website or lower the cost. This is getting out of hand on WebNovel please I really want to read your story as well as many other stories but I can’t afford it. Thank you. Keep up the good work though.

I love your story. I read up to 200 chapters nearly a year ago now reading, but I was wondering, did you plan on having any kind of romance for any of the characters but keep up the good work like it

I’d like your novel so far it’s pretty good however I don’t think you should be charging for this at all. You should talk to WebNovel and cancel the payment because your WebNovel is kind of a rip off the whole introduction and the first few chapters are the exact same thing as a Chinese novel that has been written long before this has and has an anime abject patient for it that just came out It is called the Prince the Yuan or something like that I’m all for people copying novels like this and making their own kind of thing go ahead however for you to charge when something like this already exist that’s not right right now should be classified as a fan fic and you shouldn’t have people paying to read your story when itself is almost a copy like I said you change a lot, but it’s almost copy