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In a sense yes but in the stages of evolution, he's just a hatchling shade, which doesn't sound like a proper creature so I just called him a shade!
I'm changing it to that! LoL!!!!
For the first question, the reason behind the background makes sense in later chapters as I can't just layout emotional trauma from the get-go of the story as there isn't a catalyst for his dark past to emerge until later on. As for the second question, He gathers a party because he knows the weaknesses of his own class, meaning that if he ever ran out of mana in the middle of a fight, he would become useless, hence the party members. Plus a cast of characters lightens the load on the main character and gives him something to stick to other than his desire for revenge. I guess I should edit the previous parts to make things clearer, but they do become apparent in later chapters. Thank you for your comment it does mean a lot!
That's the problem it isn't forced but I can't tell why because it'll ruin the plot!
He does get straightened out and excessively, that's why I added his narcissistic side as a way to keep the story a little lively.
Your totally right and I did, each of the city names and capitals have their own unique names that are related to the creatures in mind but like the continent is shared among multiple races so I couldn't exactly choose a specific name.
Healers drink blood....?
Well from their point of view, he did kill people and resurrect them to serve him, I would say that would earn you the title of infamous.
Narcissism 100
Exactly can it be familiar? It is always blue!
I thought that using his fist would have more applications than using a wooden club that would only send the knights flying.
My man (or woman), no offense taken, but have you tried reading till even chapter 5? Like yes, some RPG elements are bound to be the same and the revenge is to give the character a goal, but other than that the whole story, world, and events are different! I would like to ask you to continue the story and see if there are more likeness and thank you for comparing my story with a multi viewed novel like nanomancer!
I'm enjoying your comment! Thank you!
May I ask why?
Thank you for the support, I really appreciate it.
Don't worry about it, I appreciated the sentiment.