Davidplays_5397
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2024
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this chapter doesn't flow we'll I don't understand what the actual priorities of this protagonist are I like the novel and genre and the ideas and the system but it's not flowing well I don't understand it may be a language or grammar problem
anyways im come out
hell no . I'm sick of this they're always coming up with fake first you know you could have just gone with a simple quirk Awakening and have offer one starts doing the ability and then have a battle all night and marvel heroes it will just seem to sleep blend into the plot of marvel why is no one writing this it's gold and then you can just also write an invasion a lot etc a lot of things not fate is boring stuff like this everything's okay
haha they can't the plot amor strong like that
keep working hard you have a great plot slow and steady
no the idea of this is too make him op but not unbalanced in power. or else he could have just been giving the power to control or fundamental and conceptual forces in the Omniverse . so yeah he actually did a good job at least whoever granted him his powers let him have some Omni abilities not like other fanfics