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It's quite good. The character development is on point, and the fleshing of the world is also well-paced.

A good ratio of suspense and realization. G3 really goes above and beyond in the world building and character interactions.

Not your run of the mill JJK fanfic. Helios does an excellent job at creating obstacles to temper the MC and has a good understanding of the JJK verse, allowing for a very enjoyable read.

Overall, it's a good story with good pacing, great character development, and a cohesive layout. The only issue is that the language used feels very robotic at times.

Alright, let's start. I've read 60+ chapters of this and have grown to like it. My only problem is that some character interaction is kinda bland. However, it isn't enough to detract from the story. A good read.

could be a mix of subtle pain and excitement. After all, bro just got reincarnated.

I know, but I'm not seeing any fics with good execution. Nearly all the authors start going down a bad direction :(

Could you do a DBZ fic with gohan? I think he's the potential man of DBZ