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I waiting for one novel where they say the world is dirty politics and strong eat weak but they failed to show it in MC's situation everytime..in some cases They will kill an entire village just because a child was unknowingly playing there when they are discussing a secret just so they won't be spotted but here you are saying that a giant family who is hellbent on killing MC won't even touch MC family..
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I will say it's a good option for kozuki because he can't stay in the village with those hypocrites elders and he can get stronger and make the others stronger because only a resolution can make them stronger.. Now people who are saying this is bad I will say that Naruto world is not 20th century, war happens all time even for small issues and you for author who is writing a story of a character in that type of environment you have to write by thinking like you are in that world and he did same too... I appreciate authors whether it's a good or bad story because they are writing that not people like us who are judging that without effort.. If you don't like the story just go back and read a new one or write a new one according to your wish..
One thing I don't like when someone ask our MC to protect and befriend MC of original, without a thought he will help why, he should make decisions on his own and go on adventure.. Not follow someone's instructions.. If he seriously trains 2-3 years iam sure he will be the strongest on the continent where they resides...why need connections to them..
best with to go SOLO
Just one request.. Don't give him any missions like impress girls or make them fall in love with him... His wife should not be selected by a system mission..i appreciate if you make his partner from God realm like some powerful god daughter sent to this world for her safety...
One thing I hate when people approach MC by showing emotions that they are like family to him and they will do anything.. Please don't use family as a bargaining chip.. Hope he won't change his mind as a freedom seeker and also please and never show over respect to others...
Why you want to be in Team 7 because of plot..šš No matter how much you change sasuke when orochimaru give him curse and tell him he will become more stronger than Naruto..he will happily leave village then he left with that useless sakura...š„±š„±
One funny thing is that MC got a quest to do exercise at 5AM daily. First day he get up 5AM and he has to go out of his room and greet the girl he wasted time and couldn't complete. Now here comes the funny part if you want go out at 5AM what will you do get up at 5AM and fresh up then start going out. You should be atleast 10min early. The next he get up at 5AM and waste another 5min and still can't complete quest. Funny moments š¤£š¤£ Overall a good story.. Character development is good too. Here MC didn't blindly follow beliefs that a hero shouldn't kill and spare every villain. He thought that if that villain goes and kill some innocent isn't that exact opposite thing he do.