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xraylou

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2020-08-14 JoinedGlobal
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  • xraylou
    xraylou3yr
    Posted

    Unrealistic/unconvincing scenerios at times. Character developement/histories/tImelines didn’t make sense or flow properly. Had potential but went weird directions at times. There were times when the writing quality dropped a bit, but would come back to level. If it weren’t For the good developement of the character Enzo it wouldnt have kept my attention.

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    Bullied To Love
    Urban · mss_amalee
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  • xraylou
    xraylou3yr
    Commented

    Immediately made me think of this...

    Ch 294 The loving family- Part 2
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    The Crown's Obsession
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • xraylou
    xraylou3yr
    Commented

    Ugh!!! The wait for the next chapters... not putting pressure on the author, but... Stopping it right there is torture 😆

    "Because I love you." He yelled. 
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    Married to the Devil's Son
    Fantasy · JasmineJosef
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    xraylou3yr
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    The Crown's Obsession
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • xraylou
    xraylou3yr
    Commented

    OH! YOU LITTLE B@&$*!!!!

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    The Crown's Obsession
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • xraylou
    xraylou3yr
    Commented

    I can’t decide who to be more worried abou—Zarin or Zemiel. I also can’t decide which one she should choose, but Zarin should have admitted his feelings sooner. It might be too late...

    Ch 168 Chapter 45
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    Married to the Devil's Son
    Fantasy · JasmineJosef
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  • xraylou
    xraylou3yr
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    He took her hand gently and pulled her closer. "Do you mind staying awake tonight?" 
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    Married to the Devil's Son
    Fantasy · JasmineJosef
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  • xraylou
    xraylou3yr
    Commented

    Clever! VERY CLEVER!!! You Do know how to engage your fans. What a fun way to explore the characters you’ve developed and intertwined!

    Ch 158 Interview with the characters-2
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    Heidi and the Lord
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • xraylou
    xraylou3yr
    Commented

    I have NEVER cried over a book!!! You had me absolutely Sobbing!!! Vision so “blurred” by tears I could barely read the part where it gets even better. What a roller coaster of emotions that I’d never thought a book could bring to me in a hundred years!!! Amazing author!!!

    Ch 156 Epilogue- Part 2
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    Heidi and the Lord
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • xraylou
    xraylou3yr
    Commented

    I love how the author intertwines the stories so perfectly!!

    Ch 127 Time in Mythweald
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    Heidi and the Lord
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • xraylou
    xraylou3yr
    Posted

    I really wondered if This sequel could live up to the first book as it was sooo good. This one has a different tone of course but blends the history learned in the first book nicely. It builds on the knowledge from the first without focucing on it too much. This is also a slow smolder storyline that makes it so you never want to stop reading. I’m enjoying this one just as much as the first yet I’m glad to know there is another to follow.

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    Heidi and the Lord
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • xraylou
    xraylou3yr
    Commented

    At least he’s trying to tell her nicely...😄

    "She is an old vampiress. They have different ideals and I understand that it doesn't sit well with you but you only need to bear with it for tonight. But if you want you can be subtle about your opinions. They are of old origins and even Nicholas strays out of their path because they are meddlesome people. Please," he requested her and they went back inside.
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    Heidi and the Lord
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • xraylou
    xraylou3yr
    Commented

    I would love it if she tries again and splits the first arrow with her second try 😆

    "It must have been sheer luck," Frances commented holding the bow in her hand and walking towards them, "It happened to me too the first time I targeted the mark. Why not try again?" she suggested.
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    Heidi and the Lord
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • xraylou
    xraylou3yr
    Commented

    Can’t wait for her to admit to the Lord and Warren that Nicholas would be a better match!

    Ch 51 Lake of bones- Part 1
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    Heidi and the Lord
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • xraylou
    xraylou3yr
    Posted

    Slow, smoldering teasing passion is the main theme in this book. This auther is great at leaving you wanting mire and more with every chapter. Great suspence woven through the storyline.

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    The Crown's Obsession
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • xraylou
    xraylou3yr
    Commented

    I keep waiting for Her to just throw hersrlf into his arms and tell him evetythiN—the dream, her sister, Markus, all of it!

    Ch 273 With you- Part 2
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    The Crown's Obsession
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • xraylou
    xraylou3yr
    Replied to Mary_Iris_Loncto_9003

    Too funny! 😂

    Calhoun was here.
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    The Crown's Obsession
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • xraylou
    xraylou3yr
    Posted

    Aside from grammatical and typo errors (increasing as the book goes on), its a great book. Rarely do the errors affect the storyline so its easy enough to look passed. Great charachter developement and intertwining of backstories. Im not one to read for entertainment purposes but this author has me hooked. Not an easy thing to achieve. Good job!

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    Valerian Empire
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • xraylou
    xraylou3yr
    Commented

    Thank you for filling in his story. Well done!

    Ch 124 Death of the Ghost (7)
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    Valerian Empire
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • xraylou
    xraylou3yr
    Commented

    I had posted well before finishIng the first book that i think Malphy is my favorite. Little did i know HE would be the basis for your continuation of the story! Loved the happy ending of the first and curious to see how this one plays out.

    Ch 120 Death of the Ghost (3)
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    Valerian Empire
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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