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stopped at chapter 28, too many ai writing flags, the characters are cool but there is many incoherences. There is this something artificial that prevent me from locking in the story.
The story is good but there is realy a lot of patern of AI writing : multiple words for the same things (Always 3), memory loss on small things, etc.. This would need more verification and edit before posting.
Great question! I treat System mechanics as Marcus's thinking process—when he checks stats, it's him calculating risk/reward like a real debt collector would. The 70/30 rule (70% narrative, 30% System elements) keeps things flowing. Stats only appear when they change something or drive his decisions. Glad it's landing well!
I realy enjoyed read this novel, the MC is OP but not so mush with his insane family, realy good story
Good novel, the twist of having 2 MC is fresh and their interactions is organic. i hope this novel will keep updating a this pace.
Good book, can't wait for more chapters !
Good novel. The MC is fresh and keep the style of this author.
Realy good novel, the writing is good, the characters and thers developments are enjoyable, i can't wait to have more chapters !
good story, just not my style, i droped chapter 92 for now