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MrLateUpdates2yrReplied to GolemSpartanThanks
"Yes, one of my clients called and I had to answer, the call took too long." Light half-lied, as he danced with the red-haired girl who narrowed her eyes. She could never truly know whether he was lying or not, his facial expression was always vacant and emotionless, only smiling at sweets or when he solved a tough case. She took doubts from her head and sighed, doubting her childhood friend would do no good. She knew he wasn't the kind of person to cause harm in others, but she still couldn't help but worry, he had a knack for getting into unneeded problems… Mostly because he actively went out to find the problems, be it murder, extortion or robery, he was always there, trying to solve a case, like an idiot dog chacing after it's own tail, except that most times, this idiot dog managed to catch it's tail… all of the time.- MrLateUpdates2yrReplied to GolemSpartan
Yes
Pyrrha had just beaten a team in Beacon easily. She stood on top of the four while looking up at her professor. - MrLateUpdates2yrReplied to GolemSpartan
Thank you, the decision-making in the story takes me a long time to do
He walked to the nearest one and smirked as he saw a key next to it. He took out a paper clip he had on his pocket and started lockpicking the key, once he heard a satisfying click he flipped it. There was a powering down noise as the whole tower shut down completely. The boy hastily took out a posted note and wrote on it <Do not turn the power back on, Coil> - MrLateUpdates2yrReplied to Times_Avatar
That'd be accurate, remember he has a facemask as well
"B-But, h-hair a-and t-tall!" She listed aspects of the boy she had seen before, surprised by the sudden change. Now if only they could see what was behind the mask. - MrLateUpdates2yrReplied to nutt
- MrLateUpdates2yrReplied to nuttCh 17 L and Coil
- MrLateUpdates3yrReplied to DeadmanT
I completely understand, thank you for reading my comment. A lot of writers ignore or insult me when I try to give small pieces of advice. I know I'm not that good either, but I want to help even if it's just a little. I hope it didn't across as agressive and don't worry, I don't care that much about spelling in comments. :p
When my hand touched her cheek she look me in the eyes. "Please live your life for both of us. Don't let anything or anyone drag you down. Live your life to the full because you live for the two of us now." and with those as my last words i past away. - MrLateUpdates3yrCommented
I see what you did here
- I believe I can touch the sky - MrLateUpdates3yrCommented
Practically a better reality marble since you can stay inside forever
- passively teleport the part of your body that is being hit to the users dimension - MrLateUpdates3yrCommented
This power!!! Its too great for our mortal world!!!
- I can take a cookie at the kitchen without being notice - MrLateUpdates3yrCommented
Java first timers be like:
Somewhere in a certain forest stood a pale blue western dragon with celestial blue scales looking at the full 'moon' . - MrLateUpdates3yrReplied to Ancient_
I don't think he knows how to do that
"I didn't take the Philosopher's stone with any evil intentions, I assure you. I just need to do a couple of things to ensure my and my family's continued well-being, and I believe that you are the best people to help me. Besides, I have it in good authority that if I didn't take the stone, someone else would try to do it and it would get destroyed along the way." - MrLateUpdates3yrReplied to Tony_Marks
there shouldn't be a sister wand since Salazar himself made the wand
This chapter has been deleted. - MrLateUpdates3yrCommented
No. By a person called Nonya. Sorry I'm too busy.
This question was usually followed by: 'Can you teach me?', 'Who allowed you to compete?' and the killer one – 'Can you help me with my homework?'. - MrLateUpdates3yrReplied to FrozenApple
To be fair, he already had noticed something was wrong, he was just not sure what.
'She's still too inexperienced,' Draco thought to himself with a slight smirk as he observed Anastasia's leaving figure. 'But she's only thirteen and she already performed well enough until now…' - MrLateUpdates3yrCommented
Those are huge disadvantages XD
However, aside from those few disadvantages, the Grimoires were preferred by many witches and wizards. First of all, they didn't consume as much magic when casting the same spell with Grimoire compared to doing so with a wand. Secondly, one didn't have to remember wand gestures and corresponding incantations – just open the book to the correct page and concentrate magic into the palm, and the spell is ready! - MrLateUpdates3yrReplied to Cmpaboy
People can still die in duels which is why there is the whole "second" thing
After all, as a modern man he had never experienced such things as fighting for his own life – he hadn't been a policeman, a soldier or a firefighter. He was a normal civilian! He had never even been mugged before! - MrLateUpdates3yrReplied to Bagwis_
I don't think that Alex would do something like that, I think he is sly and such but I don't think he'd be a douch*** in public
As such, Harry didn't manage to get an exception and become the Seeker of the Gryffindor Quidditch team. Draco thought that it was a good thing – the bespectacled boy didn't need any more exposure and should concentrate on his studies, anyway. Besides, he could also always properly and fairly try out next year, when he became a second-year. - MrLateUpdates3yrCommented
Sounds like my old history teacher lol
"I would rather you exorcise Binns. That's our History teacher. Even the Draught of Living Dead isn't as powerful as his ability to induce sleep in students," snorted Ernest Macmillan, who was standing beside them and accidentally overheard their discussion.