when i read that it was a small white box my mind drifted into the gutter a bit...i thought prim was giving her a pair of panties...the still warm kind...

something like what pyrra uses except the shield attaches to the base of the spear and the shield itself turns into a crossbow similar to a Ballista that shoots for ranged attacks or stays folded up like a giant battle axe that way she can use the tip of the spear to attack people from behind or use it to stab into the ground for stopping the extra recoil from firing the ballista/crossbow 😂

lol for some reason i was half expecting prim to pull out a second lolipop and give it to the girl after she said you are mine...

Ahhh, i love the smell of napalm in the morning...quick someone get me some marshmallows, we're having Smores!!!

prim is going to princess carry weiss...and maybe, kinda, sorta, accidentally, unhook weiss' bra...YURI IS LIFE!!!

lol the authors note at the end reminds me of a D&D spread sheet...

ooo, i like where this is going...

thank you for the chapter...i am loving this mc and i look forward to finding out what other shenanigans he will get up to...

...what are the chances that while "sleeping" the bra will come off, or slide up, or get tangled so badly that it NEEDS to come off to get fixed?

so far so good but...need moar!

"optional smut chapter"? ""HA! "optional" smut there is no such thing, there either is or is not"" - master yoda

...space jutsu "random inpalement" kinda like the "flying thunder god jutsu" but just teleport your sword into his head like one of those gag headbands with the arrow but with a sword and for real...

you are a menace too all forms of entertainment media...I LOVE IT!!![img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

id say 3 you are doing much better since the start and the story is alot easyer to read now please keep it up [img=recommend]

that line about disappointment..."the fifth element" nice.

Hi Im Buddy the Elf, whats your favorite color?

...not about fanfic huh...

you know...for a " stupid snake " she can be smarter than most people[img=recommend]

if one suit of armor is not enough wear more...its called layering

you are a fantastic writer...but take your time so it doesn't harm you from burnout