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GL isn't my usual cup of tea, but I still found it relatable and engaging. (I tend to watch a lot of anime and the story draws heavy tropes from light-novels) The style is fluid and the grammar doesn't detract from the reading which automatically puts this novel among the top bracket on the website. Overall an A grade work shaping up to be a good story!
The story is a classic fantasy revenge story with LITRPG mechanics. Overall, I'm a big sucker for plots involve righting wrong and avenging injustice so I was immediately drawn in. Only issue was the use of dialogue attribution. Specifically during the first page, it made it difficult to tell who was who. Other than that it is a great start!
This is a very original take that I haven't seen. It mixes two tropes (author in their own story and reincarnation into a fantasy world) and so far does it really well. The exposition at the start had some minor grammatical errors which detracted me for a bit but otherwise it is a good story with a solid plot.
The MC by far is the best part of this story. Both because of his uniqueness and because of the strength of the character's voice. When I was reading the chapters it felt like I was seeing the eyes through his lens versus watching like a dispassionate observer. There are a few stylistic tendencies which I found disruptive but that is mostly my subjective taste. The overruse of onomatopoeias stood out the most. Other than that, it is the start of one of the better webnovel series that I have read so great job author!