I think that it's a great story - so far at least. A very interesting plotline with an interesting background, real enough to seem sort of relatable, but fictitious enough to convince me that this is a fantasy novel. Keep up the good work! :D

This story is amazing. I love how you put the time and effort into all the translation, and the research too. The story is well developed, and it is also very descriptive. Keep up the great work, author! :D